Elishavet Elroi

@annabelle

Bwahahaha! Glad to shake the foundations upon which you built your view of these books!

(Okay, maybe just teasing a little…)

I will admit that although I like Maraly, I don’t think the two personalities would work well together. I don’t know, but I think that I think Kalmar has changed a lot since then, and that he will continue to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, good! Because, just warning: more are definitely coming. XD

(Yes! Actually The Shepherd/Lord is what they call Jesus, but the kings and princes of Eirtan are also called Shepherds. [and I’ll let you guess about the other titles he refers to 😉 ])

Sounds good to me!

Ocran

He was getting close. More than once he had caught…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

…and I’m back!

Ocran

The castle corridors wound on and on, and the light from the windows was mostly moonlight now. He had changed his torch thrice since the hunt began.

He would catch her, and when she did she’d pay for it. She showed too much if that easy bravery, that unquenchable friendliness that more than bordered on…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes!! This is fun. I’ll have to take a pause in after this to get ready for church tonight, but maybe I can hop back on later.

Ocran

Aha! Someone was holding a one-sided conversation down the left hall. Definitely that Jocelyn girl.

He sped up the hall, passing darkening windows on his left.

He’d catch her soon. He always…[Read more]

@annabelle

Ok, just hopping on here and completely interupting because-

*Tries to hold in tirade.*

Did you just couple Kalmar with Maraly?

No. Not at all.

For one, can a character make a friend without it becoming a love interest, please? (Ok, that was my frustration at a different book speaking, sorry.)

Still, not Maraly. If we’re going to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Whoo hoo! Nyx is so good. XD

Ocran

The girl smiled at his rebuke.

“Now darling, don’t worry,” she said to the little beast, or she had better be talking to it, because darling would be the crowning insult of her many rude comments. “I’m sure he didn’t mean.”

The creature was nothing abated. It continued to hiss and spit, s…[Read more]

@maryg3

Good!I’m really glad it helped. Sometimes my illustrations do worse than nothing. XD

@r-m-archer

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are epic).

Thanks! Yours sounds pretty neat too. Viking braids are great. My sisters and I actually do a variation of one of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Hahahahaha! Sorry, I was working on my math and trying not to pay attention to my phone.

Ocran

The girl waved her hand as if she were talking to a fellow child. Extremely impertinent. Ocran glowered, but she remained undeterred.

“Hiya! Name’s Jocelyn, and this here’s my darling Nyx!” The Nyx creature bounded to it’s feet when…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

So, I just went ahead and started his part.

Okay…. Random idea sparker

Ocran

A girl came hurtling down the passage, her long hair flying behind her like a comet’s tail, an excited gleam in her eyes.

“Who are you, and what are you doing?” Ocran thundered.

She skidded to a halt, her eyes wide. A little foxish creature tumbled to a stop beside her.

@godlyfantasy12

Maybe you could start the introduction, and I’ll go from there. But I can do it too, if you’d rather.

@godlyfantasy12

Hahaha-*laugh is suddenly cut short with the realization hits that I practically did the same thing*

I love Esben. I also love that (if I’m not mistaken) Kalmar is shown what Esben looked like before the fall of The Shining Isle.

Anyway, my favorite characters are probably Janner, Leeli, Artham, Kalmar, Esben… Ik, just take…[Read more]

@emilysf

Oh, those are some interesting characters! I think I’ll like Sofia. 😉

Haha, missed yours again. XD but I think they work together, maybe.

Now I’m going to go back and make sure I didn’t miss another.

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, yes, yes!!! That’s perfect.

Ocran (totally needs a dramatic musical score)

Boom, buddoom, doom, doom!

*Nose laugh*

Anywayzees,

Ocran

The noon sun had begun to make it’s way off the height of the heavens and looked in through the high, narrow window. Ocran paused to study the stone work in it’s revealing light.

Finally satisfied, he stepped away and on down the hallway.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly!!! XD

Plus, having Viktor right here, kinda represents how the kingdom of Eirtan is continuing right under his very nose. Bwahahaha!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @everyone-else

Crazy idea: what if the castle belongs to Ocran!?

@godlyfantasy12

Ocran

Ocran strode down the length of the corridor, halting before a narrow door.

Walking helped take his mind off the rumors.

Oh, the foolish people! Did they think he didn’t hear their murmurings? Their whispered hopes?

He spat.

They aught to know better, the Eagle had fallen, the Hawk was crippled. The ashes of the heirs…[Read more]