@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Oh no! That is a valid excuse. I hope you’re feeling okay. I’ll be praying for you.
Concerning the characters…
Viktor
A pleasant chime sounded from the depths of the library. Viktor smiled slightly.
Then he realized the others weren’t smiling. Hugo sighed.
“You better check your schedules. This might be an unlucky…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
I need to write too. XD
Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
AHH! Godly is here!
*Hugs*
What do we have here? A November scene?!
*Excited reading*
*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*
Who is this creep?
*plots to cause him destruction*
*finishes reading*
Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.
Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.
*sees clean gesture drawing*
*is in bliss*
I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…
I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.
Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Basically what everyone has said. XD
But since I must have my own take documented..
I believe everyone it on a path either towards for away from God. Everyone is seeking the One that can fill the hole in their lives. If you have that, then you have a duty to share it. Similarly, if you believe others will actually face eternal doom,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator
It is being attempted. *cracks knuckles*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?
Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
I sympathize with the soundtrack issue. I imagine scenes and plot points behind almost any instrumental song. But when it’s from Apollo 13, which I have never watched… I’m not perfectly comfortable just connecting the two. And of course it fells awkward to explain to people. XD
Like, no. My book has nothing to do with Lord of the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
LOl! It is kinds my profile here too, so I might have to apologize for being confusing. XD
CWW has some good memories though…
I can totally see that in your writing. For some reason that sentence just sounded a lot like some of the shorter snippets I’ve read from you.
Really? Now I’m curious. XD I’m always interested in how my w…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aw, I forgot Marcel was taking Ellie. I don’t know how. I love a good friend dynamic. Those two are so cute.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whoever @koshka
I am once more on the infamous computer that does not do accent marks. My darling is sad. He needs his daily dose of flair.
Reuven
Large, echoing corridors filled with rushing students and chatting staff swallowed Reuven up into their midst. He gripped the straps to his duffle and ducked by a group of arguing teens. The…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh, good one! I recently learned a lot about how my brain works by comparing my drawings to my writing style. For instance, I like to find little details that describe a whole, whether that’s in water color or prose. Then I realized that I notice little things in my environment, to the point that I might miss something obvious…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@hypridlore @loopylin
*Dusts off those ten+3 snowballs*
*Realizes I have 42 words worth of snow left on me*
I am 608 words into my 1,500 word essay. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Eeeeek! I like this. It makes a lot of sense.
*enthusiastic nods*
*flits off to see the Pinterest board*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
If I remember right, he has long experience breaking out of jail, and so somehow lifts the bolt with a length of cord. Or something. I think your theory is entirely possible. It is the Mousethief, after all. XD
It’s been a while since I read it too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Lol. And I just jump in talking about Knights and death ravens while the conversation is leaning toward intergalactic elves. This is what makes KP what it is.
*Poof of random glitter*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @ducktater
That’s true! Like in Mossflower, where the one mousethief just escapes. Hilarious yes, but dreadfully convenient. One can still save One’s character, but it needs to fit the rules.
Of course, to mix stuff up you can always make a master prison that has a weakness that both the good guys and the bad guys exploit. L…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oof!
Deflects it with the essay I’ll start today.
I have about 50 snowballs stashed away in here…
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