Elishavet Elroi

Soooo….

I more than started getting ready for the guards to attack. 😬 XD

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

The groups sound pretty good, Alyona and Lynn would be rather fun, one they get to know each other. Alyona is quiet, but she isn’t exactly timid. Outgoing natures remind her of her little sister, and she’s happy with that.

Alyona would be interesting with anyone, although she may have to open up…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

*Comes flying into the tower window*

I’m back!!!!

*Lands in a crouch, cloak slid over one shoulder, green wool against a blue linen kirtle. Soft fabric on stone*

Because we can do all things in our imaginations. (Including owning said 10th century garb. *Sigh*)

Anyway, I have returned from my…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

Um, what just happened?! O.O

That was interesting, and it definitely had me hooked while reading it. I’ll have to think over any edits etc., but for now, that’s pretty good.

@freedomwriter76

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, y’all! You’re really encouraging, and I’m glad you like it!

Yes, she is a bit hopeless, she knows deep in her heart that she’s headed for spiritual bankruptcy, but she’s seen so much already that she’s almost dead inside. It has a lot to do with the certain kind of things she’s involved in. Nasty, ugly…[Read more]

So, for tags! (Let’s see if I can remember them.) If I didn’t tag you, don’t feel like you can’t say anything, or if you know if someone who might like to help, then feel free to take them.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @joy-caroline @power @ANYBODY

@lydia-s

Ooooooooooooooo! Like it is said above, this is ingenious!

Ok, so I will probably be on here a lot….

This picture, if it goes through, is actually of a chapel in the underground cities created by soldiers in the trenches in France during WWI.

@freedomwriter76

Eewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

I quote Viktor.

Did they just…

kiss?

*retches into trash can*

Just teasing. 😉 Although that was my reaction to the last little bit, especially the last sentence, there were a lot of reactions packed into that scene. It got rather tense.

And I love the dialogue! And that Ezra took the bullet for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwww.

My heart has melted.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Yes, I’d say this has escalated. XD

Alyona

Screeches and hisses filled Alyona’s ears, driving rest from her mind. She flew to her feet, heart pounding, looking for a broom – anything really.

Two animals were locked together in feirce combat. Around them hovered two children, faced stricken…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Aww, Naja is adorable. And she even looks a little like Riker!

I’ll go ahead and respond.

Viktor

Morning was here. Viktor lay perfectly still, watching the sunlight soak the walls.

His back ached, but his head had escaped injury.

He’d woken once in the… Earlier morning, just as he was…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I concur! That sounds like a good plan to me.

@godlyfantasy12

But I won’t be for long, because I actually have to get up tomorrow before nine. (Or eight for that matter. Yikes! 😉 )

@godlyfantasy12

I’m on.

And I love your response, by the way! Nyx is hilarious, and the rest were just, oh my heart.

Of course, Naja probably didn’t like getting separated from her daddy, but I guess she likes Eva. Or doesn’t mind if Nyx is there to cuddle. XD I don’t know, I’ll let her author figure that out. 😉

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Okay, so I’ll try to get things moving along.

Alyona

“Good night.” Alyona called after Viktor as he and the rest of the boy-men left the room the girls had moved to. It was right above the one with the window and Alyona couldn’t help but think that this was how a sheep must feel when her…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good! (It was.)

Thank you, that makes me so happy. Although, not that I’m happy that you’re crying, which I wouldn’t be, but you know. 😉

That should mean it’s touching; that it moved my audience. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, I love it!

*Sobs*

It’s so, so… Satisfying? Nit that she does, but that’s such a good way to build…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That is a really weird sentence, but totally accurate. XD and obvious. It’s beautiful, even in it’s nastiness.

Alwin also knows he’s gonna die, and literally his only prayer is that 1, his work will continue and that those they’ve reached will not be destroyed, and 2, that if his wife and daughter survive, they will continue…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Good idea!

Now is it why I’m killing him, or why the other characters kill him?

Why I’m killing him is that, well, it’s a little complicated.

When I first had the inspiration for him, it was as a serf that was killed for treason. This I always planned to kill him. However, after the story changed a bit and he became an MC, I…[Read more]