@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Greetings friends! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
Hi Elishavet! I love your name! And yay, we write the same genre!
Awww, thank you! I love it to. 😉 And, yes we do! What’s your favorite thing about writing this particular genre?
Oh awesome! I love reading trilogies, and it’s proved to be fun to write too! Writing series just gives you that extra room to explore some more t…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
If I die of laughter, it shall be a good death.
I’m having too much fun at my characters’ expense. It’s just that, I think that by going this direction, I can get some more character development and story inspiration. 😉 You know.
Viktor
The passage ahead was full of strangers – armed…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
Heart pounding, feet stumbling, Viktor listened with astonished ears to the voices filtering through Mikkel’s crack in the door.
Completely unrecognizable.
He swiped his hair off his forehead, combing it back with his nervous fingers.
“Guide us, Lord.”
Only Mikkel’s request kept…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All right!
Alyona
From her place a top the garden wall, she could make out the three gardens, all free of gaurds.
Relief, sweet relief, swept through her like the harvest wind. She took a deep breath and glanced back.
If only Viktor could be here, safe as well.
Jocelyn had come over behind…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awww, Lynnie…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yessss! That was hilarious. And hey, Ocran needs a little more humility anyway.
(Of course teasing November is fun. I have a couple in my other series, Alwin and Winifrith, and I am so looking forward to when they start getting teased about each other. XD like, it’s absurd, but I love it. XD and poor Alwin, he’s a little…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Okay, y’all I think it’s time for a quick POV from Ocran…. Whether or not he actually comes on the scene, you know.
Ocran
Immer, a captain of his castle gaurd, stood at attention before Ocran’s desk. Sweat beaded on the man’s forehead, and his boots were spattered in mud and blood.
This…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
And Viktor and Alya would be like: “A fellow Eirtan, finally!!!” XD
Leon does kinda look the part…. If it weren’t for his strange, WWII era clothing. XD
Well, Riker and Leon have to run into each other somehow. 🙂 Maybe this door could lead them right into each other.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awwwww, it sounds like Jayden’s finally finding healing in that excerpt. And yes, so sweet.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scene (& Explanation) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
It’s pretty good! I really enjoyed reading that just now. It’s very interesting.
But does Axel get free? Also, do they have to fight to the death? Does he die in the end?
And I don’t really like the giants either, even though they can be rather funny.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Greetings friends! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
Greetings, and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I also mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, and a bunch of random stuff.
Your WIPs sound most intriguing, but especially your trilogy. I’m mildly partial to trilogies, because I still have the idea that my first WIP is a trilogy…. Even though…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Sooo……….A quick warning and explanation.
The warning, You would not believe how many triggers Viktor has had in the last 24 hours! Things will get stressful if he remembers something more than usual.
And as the explanation, Since I haven’t developed Eishlagair enough to use anything…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Awwwww, that is SO sweet! And sad. I love it.
Should I do one for Davan? (Viktor’s older brother who was stillborn) Grayson’s collage is making me think of him.
And because it also gave me random inspiration, here’s a bit from my little side stories.
 “We’ll name him Davan.” Amicai said softly, his voice crushed in grief.…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s awesome! To be completely frank, I only know two songs on there by name, but they totally fit!
I really like God Only Knows. (My Mama likes For King and Country)
Poor Jayden. *Sniff*
So, I have a list of 26 songs all for Kingdom of Shadows, and ranging from atmospheric instrumental to character songs. Here are…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing AUs of your own stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Until this point I haven’t truly understood what an AU was. Thank you for explaining it.
Actually, sort of? Not really. I guess I’m more likely to write “lost fragments” of my stories. You know, parts that I love, but that happen outside of the book. They’ll probably end up in an index thing in the back of my books, if I ever finish…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s okay! I was still sorta “logged in” on our Chromebook, so maybe it just wouldn’t let me log in on a different device. I don’t know. Whatever the reason, I can get on if I use my Chromebook, and it does work best on the Chromebook, so I’ll just use that. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I totally get that! We’ll see if I actually use it or not…. Or if I end up just accumulating goals…..
Anyway, I’ll probably be on here more than on there, since I’ll be avoiding looking at my unfinished projects. Lol!
Also, it’s not actually letting me on there at all, so there’s that.
What does it mean if…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Who wants a Marvel AU? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
A little gasp is heard from a shadowy corner. On further inspection, a cloaked figure can be seen.Â
You caught me!
So…
Yes, I’m enjoying reading this. My knowledge of Marvel has extended to people’s names. XD
I love the way you’re building the kids as each one slowly opens up. It’s really fun to read!
*Slips back into…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Prayer & Praise Forum? (new topic suggestion) in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 2 months ago
Something like that would be really good.
I think the Calling and Mission forum is what’s been used in leu of that for the time that I’ve been on here. Which *gasps* has been about a year exactly!!
(Yeah, I’m good at bunny trails too. XD)
By the way, I hope everything’s been going well in your part if the Kingdom. I’ll know…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
OK! So, I should have a profile on there under the same alias as here: Elishavet Pidyon.
Thank you for doing this!
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