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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Oh, Lily… XD I’d want to do the same, though.
Viktor
“Viktor!” The tiny lass looked up at him, pleading with her large, sweet eyes. “Can I pet her?”
Riker started, obviously not comfortable with it. Neither was Leon, if expressions said anything. Esen was a prey bird, after all, and of a dau…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@koshka @freeddomwriter @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Viktor
Riker had walked to the doorway, but Viktor couldn’t tell much of their conversation. At least, he didn’t care to, not right now. His neck was craned and his eyes glued to a spot of dark feathers in the sky above.
Was it…?
Suddenly, a prey bird’s cry fell down to them: the cry of a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 NOVEMBER!!!!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Okay, let’s see if this will make sense. (I hope what I did with Lily works; she’s so sweet!)
Viktor
Lily laughed, making Reúven’s smile grow even softer. The hard edge was gone, all trace swept away to show his cousin’s tender heart.
“I am honored by the title.” He bowed with a wink to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awwwwwww, no!!!!!
I see why it fits, that doesn’t exactly make it better, but it does. XD
@Godlyfantasy12 freedom
It is like Wingfeather! Although what it really reminds me of is the book Resistance by Jennifer A Nielson. THAT BOOK! (Esther… [..a shot rang out, followed by a splash. Then, even worse, silence.] My rough quo…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Would y'all be willing to vote? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Voted!
Whatever one you choose, I’m sure it will work out wonderfully. Keep up the good work!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Reúven
They were headed out now, on the quest in search of November’s folk. Leon had taken the lead, pulling Reúven and Viktor into conversation.
“So, have you been up to much lately?”
“The usual.” Reúven smirked. “For war and herding, that is. Ay, Viktor?”
“Ay.”
Leon frowned. “You’re still at wa…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh, and *Raises hand* we have church on Wednesdays too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
So… What is planned for Paxton and Leo and the rest?
My surmises that
canshould be corrected are:- Paxton runs into Leon and my shepherd boys, or
- He runs into someone else. (If nobody is defined, he can run into Alwin and William… But only if you don’t have any other ideas.)
- Leo is…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Understood! We’ve been intending to dress up for a Civil War reenactment nearby, but making the clothing has been a long process. (Of mostly 1. Explode with ideas. 2. Buy supplies and dive into sewing. 3. Need more supplies and realize they’re too expensive. 4. Set it aside. 5. Repeat.)
That would be amazing! If you do end up…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sounds super fun! I really like the characters.
As for ideas….
Any specific directions in mind?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 awww, thank you so much! I’ll tell them. 😉 And poor, sweet Paxton. @freedomwriter76 I hope your back gets better; I’ll be praying for you. Spinal problems are hard. @keliah-h @koshka
Reúven
Prison. He’d been there a few times over the years. It wasn’t a good place, but it was better than the alternative.
He smiled a slow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy yes, Viktor does have fire trauma, even though he’s gotten used to it because it’s a necesary part of their life. He just… Doesn’t like to handle it, or have it get more than a cooking fire. It makes him jittery and anxious, which for him means he’s more prone to exclamations and studied silence.
Also, I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I’m on! Sorry I didn’t get anything in yesterday or the day before. I wanted to, but after working Children’s Church…. I was tired. XD
Church was good!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keiliah-h @godlyfantasy12
I AM BACK.
(Thankfully, no dramatic circumstances caused this little absence. I’ve just been really busy between college, schoolwork, and a Bible College preview event this weekend. But I’m back now.
Also, I’m really wondering what Paxton’s reaction would be to Esen….
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Understood! It sounds really good.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Aw, November.
And this… Wrote itself.
Reúven
Lily laughed at him, her whole face a window of light. He smiled back and winked before turning his attention to the father.
She was a darling child, although not as sweet as…. As his cousins.
He rested one hand in his belt under his mantle, taking on…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Aaaaaaaaahhhhh!
Nathan!!!
(Also, pretty great punishment, on the cruel side. It’s horrible.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yes
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