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October 19, 2022 at 1:00 pm #120012
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@joy-caroline. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @godlyfantasy12. Part 3! So…this took a bit different turn than I was first planning…but I really like it! xD But, again,
CONTENT WARNING: THIS SCENE CONTAINS SEMI-GRAPHIC VIOLENCE IN THE FORM OF A PUBLIC WHIPPING. IF YOU ARE NOT COMFORTABLE READING THAT, PLEASE, DO NOT READ!!!!!!
So…now that that’s out of the way…may we begin? š
Hitchens nodded and smiled. āGood. Browning, get over here.ā
John stepped forward, a small, reassuring smile on his face.
āTie Private Meijer to the post, will you? And move fast.ā
āYessir.ā John motioned for Nathan to follow him.
He quickly got Nathan tethered to the post. He let out a quiet sigh. āGood luck, Nathan. Heās got a hard arm when heās angry.ā
Nathan nodded. Smiled faintly. āThank you, John.ā
John grinned and stepped away. āAnytime, Nathan.ā
Hitchensā boots clicked against the hard clay dirt. āI normally handle the discipline completely on my ownā¦but there have been exceptions, and today there will be.ā He uncoiled the whip. āI said I was going to punish both of you, did I not? But Private Thomas has had this done multiple times and I suspect he no longer is afraid of it. So then, I shall not carry out the punishmentā¦he will.ā Hitchens proclaimed, shoving the whip into Dawsonās hand.
āā¦Sir? Whatā¦?ā
Nathan took in a deep breath.
Dawson couldnāt fight this.
Not if he knew what was good for him.
āWhat are you waiting for, Thomas? Hurry up and get it over with. Iāll tell you when to stop.ā
āSir, I canāt. I wonāt.ā
Hitchensā eyebrows raised and his eyes narrowed. āWhy notā¦Dawson?ā He snarled; his tone low. He rarely ever used first names onlyā¦unless he was about to burst with anger.
āI canāt, sirā¦I justā¦I canātā¦ā
The wind pulled at Nathanās hair and coat as Hitchens shoved the whip into his hands.
āNo! I canāt!ā He cried, trying to shove it back.
He was a simple drummer boy! He was twelve! He wasnāt go to whip anyoneā¦especially Dawson.
āDo it, Meijer, or youāll regret it.ā Hitchens replied, his tone carrying a warning.
āBut Iā¦Iā¦I canāt do-ā
āDo it, Nathan!ā Dawson roared. Closed his eyes. āDo itā¦Iāll be fine. I promise.ā
Nathan looked at his back, already covered with scars, and tears coursed down his cheek. āDawsonā¦noā¦ā
āDo it, kidā¦Nathanā¦Iāll be okayā¦I promise.ā
Nathan jolted out of the memory.
Eleven years agoā¦it was almost hard to believe.
āDo it, Dawson.ā He whispered.
Dawson blinked. āNathan, Iā¦ā
āItās okayā¦itās going to be okay. Iāll be okayā¦donāt worry about me. Justā¦just do itā¦come onā¦itās okayā¦I promise you; Iāll be okay.ā
Silence ensued, before Dawson finally broke it. āNathanā¦ā
āItās going to be okay.ā Nathan whispered. Promised.
Dawson stepped back, and out of the corner of his eyeā¦Nathan saw him close his eyes as tears coursed down his cheeks.
Nathan refocused his gaze forward, preparing for the inevitable.
A crack sounded in the air, and the first lash landed on his bare skin. Nathan gasped, but then bit his lip.
Dawson was already going through enough.
He wasnāt planning on adding to his pain.
But lash after lash fell, landing on flesh, then muscle. Maybe even bone at some point.
Each one that fell added more pain.
More tearing and shredding.
More fire.
Eventually, he couldnāt help but scream in agony.
Another one fell, and Nathan sank down the length of the pole, his arms now up above him. Fiery pain ensued.
Rich, crimson blood trailed from his back down to his breeches.
His breath heaved.
The world around him was getting blurry.
Another lash brought it back into focus, along with bringing a scream.
But suddenlyā¦quietlyā¦he heard a voice.
āI took all of this and so much more for youā¦donāt you believe that? I died for you, Nathan.ā
Another lash.
Another round of pain.
Another scream.
āI took all of the painā¦endured all the humiliation and scornā¦for youā¦ā
Thisā¦this was what he had enduredā¦and even more pain than this?
He had taken all of thatā¦forā¦him?
āI took all of it for the worldā¦for you. Just like David took that bullet for youā¦ā
Another lash fell, tearing at his skin.
Nathan screamed.
āā¦I took the cross for you. So you didnāt have to endure that painā¦that humiliationā¦that suffering just to be redeemed. Because I have redeemed you.ā
How?
How could he love him that much?
āAnd I did it allā¦becauseā¦I. Love. You. No matter how many mistakes you makeā¦no matter how much you mess upā¦how much you think you donāt deserve itā¦I died for youā¦I took the cross for youā¦andā¦ā
Tears began to course down Nathanās cheeks.
He wanted to believe it.
He did.
He did.
He truly did.
āā¦though I donāt have toā¦if I had toā¦Iād do it all over again. Do you believe me?ā
Nathan smiled through the painā¦through the sobsā¦the screams. āI do. Please, believe me. I do! I believe you!ā
āThen come Nathanā¦my beloved. I am hereā¦so justā¦comeā¦come to me.ā
Another lash fell, Nathanās world faded to black, and the last thing he heard was Dawson screaming his name.
October 19, 2022 at 1:01 pm #120013Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Just posted it!!!!!! š
October 19, 2022 at 1:06 pm #120015@freedomwriter76
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! ?????????
DAWSOOOOOON!!!! NATHAAAAANNNNN!!!!
BUT GOD SPEAKING TO HIM UGH MY HEAAAAARRRRTTTT!!!
HE IS GONNA BE OKAY RIGHT?!?! AND DAWSON IS GONNA BE OKAG RIGHT??!?!
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#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 1:29 pm #120018Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. IKR!!!!!! ??????
Yep, that’s the direction it started to turn, God talking to him, and I was like: “LET’S GO WITH IT!!!”
That’s a spoiler. You’ll have to wait for Part 4. š
October 19, 2022 at 1:36 pm #120019@freedomwriter76 okieā¦.
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also I made an RP!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:02 pm #120020@freedomwriter76
That scene. Was. So. Good. Some part’s of it could have been far too graphic, but not with that beautifulĀ twist. Ugh. That’s the type of books we need more of.
(Ā You can completely ignore this paragraph, but I’m adding it in because I wish someone pointed it out to me when I first started writing. So, just to save you a bunch of work later, the work Okay actually comes from the Log Cabin campaign in 1840. It originally meant ‘Old Kinderhook’, but was changed to ‘Ol Korekt’ as a political jab. It was eventually accepted as a real word, but prior to 1840s it wasn’t in existence. Alright I believe is fine. Again, I love this scene and can’t wait for the next part!)
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Koshka.
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October 19, 2022 at 2:24 pm #120026@freedomwriter76
Aaaaaaaaahhhhh!
Nathan!!!
(Also, pretty great punishment, on the cruel side. It’s horrible.)
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October 19, 2022 at 3:12 pm #120042Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. I saw! š Lemme finish my Spanish real fast, then I’ll try to get to the RP! Kinda worried about Edric and Aramis, tbh. xD But I also want conflict…so…XD
@koshka. @elishavet-pidyon. AHHHH, THANK Y’ALL SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
@elishavet-pidyon. I know!!! I panicked about him too! xD (On the inside at least…don’t want to freak out my siblings, lol. XDXDXD And yes, very horrible *shudders*)
@koshka. THANK YOU! š I’m sooooo glad you loved the twist! It just kinda came while I was writing, and I decided to go with it. š(THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT!!! *wipes sweat away* That will most certainly help me in the long run. xD)
October 19, 2022 at 6:56 pm #120070Anonymous
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@freedomwriter76
Dangggg ??
Nathan and Dawson seem to have a really interesting history. You have me intrigued.
ALSO DID HE DIE AT THE END ?
October 19, 2022 at 7:00 pm #120071Anonymous
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@joy-caroline. I know…it’s a very “dang” few scenes. xD
So glad I have you intrigued…?
Nope…he’s alive…but I can’t tell you what happens next either…?? (but I am currently working on writing it, so don’t worry! ?)
October 19, 2022 at 7:05 pm #120072Anonymous
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@freedomwriter76
*sighs in relief* OOOOH I CAN’T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT FEW SCENES!!!!
October 19, 2022 at 7:07 pm #120073Anonymous
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@joy-caroline. AWW, THANK YOU!!!! I’d say I’m almost done with Part 4, then there might also be Part 5, so…xD
October 19, 2022 at 7:51 pm #120077Anonymous
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@freedomwriter76
The more the better amiright?
October 19, 2022 at 7:55 pm #120078Anonymous
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@joy-caroline. Yep! xD
October 20, 2022 at 8:49 am #120090Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. @koshka. @elishavet-pidyon. @joy-caroline. Part 4!!!!
Faces floated before him.
Those of his mother, stroking his hair, whispering his name.
His father, telling him it was going to be alright.
His sister, urging him to wake up. Telling him she couldnāt even imagine losing him.
His brothers, telling him he needed to get up, and that they were sorry. That they didnāt mean to hurt him.
They came and went.
Spoke and were silent.
He flittered in and out of delirium.
Was it a dream?
Was it real?
He didnāt know.
A quiet groan escaped his lips.
Nathanās eyes slowly fluttered open.
Cottonā¦soft and warm.
He slowly tried to look around. He was in a wooden room. On a pallet. That much he could figure out.
Butā¦where exactlyā¦was he?
And what hadā¦Nathan groaned as more pain came from his back when he tried to sit up.
He flopped back down onto the pallet with a sigh.
Never mind.
He remembered everything.
āCome to meā¦come to meā¦ā Nathan smiled faintly.
Now that voice, he most certainly remembered.
Heād heard it, even, in his dreams.
The dreams that werenāt filled with people, but light.
A door creaked, and footsteps sounded against the wooden floor.
āā¦Nathan? Youāre awake. Oh, thank the Lord.ā Morrison got down onto one knee. Brushed a strand of Nathanās hair out of his eyes. He smiled. āHow are you feeling?ā
āā¦It still hurts.ā Nathan admitted quietly. āHow long have I beenā¦asleep?ā
āA day now.ā Morrison replied quietly. āBut youāre awake now, and thatās all that matters.ā
Nathan nodded, then noticed that Morrison was biting his lip. āā¦What? What is it?ā
āYou were mumbling a lot of random things in your sleep. Names⦠sometimesā¦your family, Iām assumingā¦ā
Nathan nodded.
āAndā¦talking aboutā¦loveā¦sacrificeā¦andā¦come to me.ā
āHe reached me, Morrison. He finally did. He spoke to meā¦and nowā¦I believe it. All of it.ā
āHonestly?ā
Nathan nodded. āYes.ā
Morrison covered his mouth with his hands. āThank you, Jesusā¦ā He whispered, tears coursing down his cheeks, and Nathan smiled.
Heād been praying this entire time. And his prayer had been answered.
Nathan smiled. Thank you, he thought, for everything, Lord.
The door opened again. āDoctor? Is everything alright inā¦ā Sophia trailed off, and her hand flew up to her mouth.
Morrison smiled, wiped away tears, and turned to face her. āEverything is perfect. Heās awake now. But Nathanā¦?ā
Nathan carefully shifted, even though it hurt, to lay on his side rather than his stomach like he had been. āShe can come in. Iā¦want her to.ā
Sophia ran over, getting down onto the floor.
She cupped his face in her hands, tears coursing down her cheeks. āDarling, oh darlingā¦ā She wept, giving him a kiss. āAre you alright? Do you need anything else?ā
Nathan smiled and kissed her again. āIām fine.ā He squeezed her hand. āI have everything I want and need right here.ā He kissed her hand.
Sophia smiled and Nathan shifted just a little to make room for her to sit beside him. She squeezed his hand.
āMorrisonā¦howā¦how did I get here?ā
Morrison turned to face him again. āDawson carried you here. He begged me to help you. Not that he needed to. I would have done so anyways.ā
āWhere is he?ā Nathan asked.
He needed to talk to him, and he needed to do so before it was too late.
āHeās here. I wasnāt going to tell him to go back after what happened.ā
āCan I talk to him? Please.ā
Morrison smiled. āOf course. Would you like me to leave?ā
Slowly, Nathan nodded. āIf you donāt mind.ā
Morrison nodded. āNot at all.ā
Sophia stood as well. āI will leave for a moment as well.ā She gave him another kiss. She took her leave of the room, Morrison did the same, and within a moment, Dawson stepped into the room, his boots clicking against the floor.
He sat on the floor in front of Nathan, legs crossed.
āHello Dawson.ā
āā¦Helloā¦ā
Nathan raised an eyebrow. āDawsonā¦Iām surprised youāre not overjoyed to see me awake.ā
āI amā¦I really amā¦justā¦ā Dawson bit his lip and trailed off.
āDawson.ā
He finally looked up, and their eyes met.
Dark rings were under Dawsonās eyes, his eyes were red, and tears were still coursing down his cheeks.
āItās. Not. Your. Fault.ā Nathan said, putting emphasis on each word. Because Dawson needed to hear it.
Just like Nathan did all those months ago.
Heād needed to know it wasnāt his fault that David had diedā¦and what David didā¦it was simplyā¦sacrifice.
The biggest example of love in the world.
āIt isā¦I could have done something, but I was a coward.ā
āThere was nothing you could have done.ā
Dawson shook his head. āThere was. I could have doneā¦something.ā
āDawsonā¦no, thatās not trueā¦ā Nathan replied, brushing a strand of his hair out of his eyes.
āYesā¦it is. I didā¦that to you.ā Dawson said quietly, motioning to Nathanās back.
āAnd?ā Nathan raised an eyebrow. āI did the same eleven years ago to you. Does that mean that was my fault too?ā
Dawson shook his head. āNo. Itās not.ā
āThen why is this your fault?ā
Dawsonās gaze fell again.
āYou did so much for meā¦the least I could do was take the punishmentā¦for you.ā
āYou shouldnāt have. And what have I done for you?ā
Nathan raised an eyebrow. āDo you really think that I believe you forgot all of it? Letās seeā¦ā Nathan began counting on his fingers, āGiving me your food, taking the blame when I stole and lied and fought, taking every single whipping Iāve ever deserved, comforting me when I needed it, taking care of me when I was sick, and justā¦being there, Dawson.ā
Dawson shook his head. āIā¦I hurt youā¦ā
āAnd it wasnāt your choice. You didnāt choose to hurt meā¦you had to.ā
Dawson shook his head. āIt doesnāt make a difference.ā
Nathan leaned back a little. Pain was still flowering from his back, but he didnāt have time to pay attention to that now.
āYou gave me strength when I wanted to give up, Dawson.ā
Dawson slightly looked up, but when Nathan looked at him, he averted his gaze.
āAnd you know what, Dawson? You convinced me of something.ā
āā¦What?ā Dawson asked quietly.
āYou convinced me to keep fighting. I was ready to give upā¦on life. But you convinced me that it was still worth it. I would have given up a long time ago if it werenāt for you. Iāmā¦alive today becauseā¦of you, Dawson.ā
Finallyā¦Dawsonās gaze rose.
Their eyes met again.
āNathanā¦ā
āI care about you, Dawson.ā
āI donāt deserve that.ā
Nathan shrugged. āNone of us do. But do you know what Iāve figured out? Iāve figured out that we donāt have to deserve it. God gives love even though we donāt deserve it. Who cares if you donāt deserve my care? I still care about you anyways.ā
āI donātā¦I donāt deserve thatā¦Nathan, justā¦stopā¦I donāt deserve any of thatā¦ā
āI donāt either. But thatās whatās so amazing about his love and graceā¦none of us deserve it. Butā¦even thenā¦he gives it anyways.ā
Dawson wiped away tears.
āA good friend died for me. I blamed myself for his death. If we hadnāt become friendsā¦he wouldnāt have been there. I questioned why he would die for me. We were on opposite sides of the warā¦and yetā¦he died for me. He took the bullet that was meant for me. But Dawsonā¦nowā¦I know. He gave his life so I could have mine. He took the bullet that was meant for me becauseā¦he loved me enough, as his friend, to die for me.ā Nathan rested his hand on Dawsonās shoulder, āAnd Jesus did the same thingā¦for all of us. Including you.ā
āHowā¦whyā¦?ā Dawson whispered, tears unashamedly running down his cheeks.
Nathan smiled. āBecause he loves you. Loved you enough to die for you. Just like how you took all of those whippings for meā¦he loved you enough to suffer and die for youā¦for meā¦for everyone.ā
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