@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I love this twist with Dietrich! It’s awesome!!
Also, I’d forgotten about Leon’s father. 😭
He needs to meet Reúven and Viktor. Like, they don’t talk about it, but then when they realize Leon just lost his father… I just want to see that.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Yuck! Frida is a slimeball.
Winton
He hadn’t wished to have this well of an introduction to the kid’s aches, but then again, perhaps that wasn’t quite right.
He shook Joshua’s hand as the boys got ready to leave.
“Goodbye Dr. Winton. Thank you for doing this.” Joshua sighed and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Awwwww, Paxton and Nyx….
*Wipes eyes*
*Takes a breath*
*Squishes them both in a group hug*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
That’s why Liora called him “Cadet Elroi”. 😉 XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Reúven is in…. (*Does some research and decides to just take CAP and the National Gaurd and Army Reserves and blend them*) the National Civil Patrol. This is a lot like actual military service, bu it is really just a program for giving youth a taste of the military and building worthy citizens. (includes training and disaster…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Wow, Arthur is such a mess. XD
Winton
Almost all the comfort in the air had disappeared the moment the raven haired girl stepped in. Her face was flaming in embarrassment and she was obviously with the friendly young man who’s stepped in before her, yet a form of darkness beyond her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
I am now!
I really like the idea of RPs at home. In fact, I’ve had one brewing for Reúven all through the weekend.
Winton
A careful look around showed that everyone had finished eating. Winton stood and clapped his hands.
“All right! Who’s ready for something more active?” A mixed…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
I’m sorry this is late, but those were really good!
I just read through to chapter seven. As soon as they got frog marched onto the truck I started to cry. Especially since I suspected they were headed for a death camp. Those last few chapters hurt so much.
(Keep up the good work!)
I am excited to meet them! (YOSEF!!!)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
By the way, so you know, I think this is the schedule of the meeting:
Food (Winton does some Would you rather games while everyone is wrapping up [it’s a good icebreaker and he gets to know the kids better.])
A game (something a little active but not exactly, like hot potato or giant…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
(I think I’m going to have to do a whole post outlining different traditions of Eirtan, because they keep on growing!)
Winton
“Liora! Come on in. You too, Viktor, we’re so glad to have you.
The two young people sat down quietly as Winton turned to the whole group.
“I think it’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
AND I DIDN’T FINISH IT!!! Okay, just a moment. *Frantic typing*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
if it makes u feel any better….we’re really looking forward to it??
That does help. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
By the way, I’ve figured out that Reúven has a hardship license (because of his father’s paraplegia). Also, because his and Liora’s families know each other so well, him giving her a ride is nothing uncommon.
ALSO!!! I kinda feel the need to explain what sounds rather funny in our…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter (I sense someone is on the trail. XD XD) @keilah-h @wilder-w
I had an RP half finished when my phone glitched off and it poofed away.
I’ll just have to rewrite it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @wilder-w @koshka @godlyfantasy12
I’m on and about to RP. Sorry it’s taken a bit.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Winton
He set a box of plastic cutlery beside the space where the pizza would go. The fruit and vegetable tray was in the little fridge in the corner of his office. Everything was basically ready.
Chairs for the club members were set around a long table in the center of the room. The…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)
So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…
I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD
But the one to one conversations are priceless!
Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!
And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.
The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
With November? No! At least, not my guys. They’re fair enough to not expect everyone else to be completely open when they aren’t.
They will be curious, however, and curiosity mean they will try to find out more.
By the way, is Corvina still in the shadows?
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