Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @e-m-trepke @godlyfantasy12

Yes, I do! Sorry it’s been a bit since I”very managed to respond, but now I’ve got ideas, so we’ll see what happens.

Alyona

They were leaving. Alyona bit her lip to keep back the sudden tears.

And to think she’d been anxious to get away from them at first!

But… Jocelyn and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I did,did it go through? I’m seriously wondering if it didn’t. It should be on the previous page.

@godlyfantasy12

I understand! But you’ll get there! Her character is so sweet and just good.

And this has helped me with my characters too. A lot.

By the way, there’s hope! Legolas is said to be Tolkein’s least developed character, and yet if someone is going to have a secret favorite, it’s probably him. (Secret because they never seem to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

YES!!!!!! Oh, it hurts so much, like when I read all the times Jonathan literally snuck out to see David and encourage him… And I know what happens in the end… And I just want to cry.

Especially when I think, Does that still happen today?

(Oh, and Corvina’s collage is really good! I think it’s so interesting how you can…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, so Luna…

Has slowly been becoming my favorite. I know I know like near nothing about her, but… She’s still climbing up there.

@freedomwriter76

(Thank you! I think she’ll keep her name. Lol.) Oh, I love the story (especially the story’s theme. That is deeply beautiful.) and the collages! The kiddos are very sweet.

I think I like Leon’s better, just because his childhood coloring is literally my own, so… It’s kinda interesting to see. XD but Riker’s big blue eyes are…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@e-m-trepke @koshka

All righty! Let’s get this end started.

Also, I think I might poof Viktor too, because then I could add in Reúven, and I really want to see those two together. Plus, I realized that I do need to develop the later version of him.

But then again, I COULD ADD ALWIN INSTEAD. And if I added him, I’d hav…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

You should absolutely read it! And yes, EXACTLY. If there isn’t hope for afterward, it makes it feel like the whole plot just isn’t worth it. (Then again, I did enjoy Resistance by Jennifer A. Neilson, but even then, it was a story of a girl learning to hope, not the other way around, even though there were times when she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You don’t sound pushy to me! 🙂 I understand; I like this too.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h
Ok, so it started to rain, and as much as I love music, I love rain more. So, I can write now, since rain-song doesn’t interrupt my words like lyrics do.

Viktor

There was a sound, just a faint one carried to them by some unfelt draft from far down the passage.

A cry?

Riker knew. He spun away,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah, I don’t really know the back story anyway, just that it’s of a young boy in Hitler’s Youth.

And well, it electrified me the first time I saw it.

@godlyfantasy12

Ok, I see it’s Paxton, and I’m like, “aww.”

Then I saw that picture.

I know that picture.

And then I was like, no. Just. No.

XD but I love it, the way it all fits together and I’m on edge. It’s so perfect. Yay, Paxton!

@godlyfantasy12

And yes, it is time.

I am prepared.

*Deep breath*

*Clings to couch arm*

@freedomwriter76

I love Jezyk’s picture! It’s exquisitely him.

And the different races of elves makes much more sense. I like it!

And oh, Fin…

Also, you got to participate in a reenactment!? I love historical clothing and reenactments…. If only it paid well. (Or at all.) Just know, that’s my dream job.

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, wow. They’re…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You’re welcome!

(Good! Yes, it will, and that’s soooo awesome! Then his kids’ll be half-elven and… Oof, yeah they won’t be happy, but hey, who said they had to be? 😉 )

@whalekeeper

Oh, thank you so much! I’m SO thrilled you like it.

So, as a premise… I’m not great at writing premises. But I’ll try!

So, the story is a five books (currently) series beginning with two boys in different kinds of bondage. One, Alwin, is in the kind you see easily. But even if it’s easily identified, that doesn’t make it simple…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh! I honestly can’t tell how many books inspired my writings, (you know how it is.) But there are definitely some key ones.

In all honesty, it was reading the Green Ember series that first made me seriously consider writing more than just a short story or two for school. That shows a lot in the story I started then. There…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes! Ocran had better look out.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

And is anyone ready to read the next chapters in The Institution? We have three more!

Chapter 2

Wilkins

Wilkins sighed, pinching the bridge of his nose. None of the words on this page made sense. In fact, none of the pages in this book did either.

The sunlight glowing in the window panes had matured, then…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh, I love this new plot! And also how you are using elves as Jews. It’s soooo perfect.

(I hope that makes sense and isn’t weird. My sister and I are using elves in a half-allegorical way as children of Light and that belong to a better place.)

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, I like that! Honestly, the term “fire elf” reminds me of a…[Read more]