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October 13, 2022 at 9:09 pm #119402
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@godlyfantasy12. It’d be SOOO FUN TO ADD THEM!!!! 😀 I’M READY TOOOOOOO!!!!!! ???
October 13, 2022 at 9:11 pm #119403I don’t know if this will go through, but KP is being… interesting right now. In my email notifications I can see that y’all have posted on here, but whenever I try to swap over to the forum it has the same castle as earlier, with is probably a page late, at this point…
Ugh. I’m trying to figure it out.
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Koshka. Reason: Ato-correct needs to be pummeled
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 13, 2022 at 9:22 pm #119405@koshka I hate when stuff like that happens!!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 13, 2022 at 9:50 pm #119416@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @e-m-trepke anyone wanna RP?
or is it my turn….
?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 13, 2022 at 10:11 pm #119417I did,did it go through? I’m seriously wondering if it didn’t. It should be on the previous page.
Hot Milk+Brown Sugar+Vanilla+Ginger+Cinnamon=All the comfort this world can offer.
October 13, 2022 at 10:20 pm #119421(*Whispered* I think It’s your turn…unless I need to put one in for Mikkel? I’m not sure what I’d say for him though.)
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 13, 2022 at 10:54 pm #119422@elishavet-pidyon just saw ur RP!! @koshka @freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke @keilah-h
November
It….
It was over.
November’s chest rattled. He tried to focus in on a single sight, but everything was a blur. His eyes cleared, giving him ample sight of everyone. Including the fallen guards.
And thankfully none of their own had fallen….
But they were injured…
And…
Some were bleeding.
And it was…Too much…too…
His stomach heaved, recoiling at the sight. His skin was clammy, his skin on fire.
A quiet groan escaped his lips as he turned away.
He was gonna be sick….
And oh…was he ever sore….
Something warm, gentle, wrapped around his neck in a flash. Tight enough to surprise him, but not enough to upset his stomach anymore then it was.
“November…” Ara cried, chin resting into his shoulder. Her voice was tear-streaked, turning his queasiness into heartache. She pulled him a bit closer and he felt as all the tension left his body.
“November….I-I…I didn’t know if you made it….” She whispered. “They said you did but….”
“Y-Yea, I-I’m okay,” he chuckled, hating the stutter in his voice. Ara let out a sigh, tickling his ear. He turned pink.
She stepped back, smiling. Then, her eyes grew wide, landing on his arms and torso.
“November, you’re bleeding!”
He blinked, glancing down.
Indeed, it seemed the hound he’d fought had gotten in quite a few good nicks…
He winced at the sight, clearing his throat.
“Ah…I-it’ll be okay..” But Ara didn’t look convinced. “R-really!” He smiled, trying to reassure her.
“Mmm….Maybe…maybe someone should check it anyway…I think everyone else will be needing it too,” she glanced back at the crowd.
Ah, right…
Speaking of…
Jocelyn
“Well…that was something….” Lyn huffed, glancing at the fox on her shoulder. She was bent over, out of breath for once in her life. Her hair half pulled from its ponytail, but still she was grinning.
She looked back at everyone else. “We all here?”
Everyone looked at her, then smiled.
Except Franz.
“Barely!” The grumpy man muttered.
Lyn shook her head, sniggering. He was a crotchety old fellow, and she didn’t like at ALL how he treated his son…but she had to admit…
His grumpiness was starting to rub off on her…
If only for the fact that it was hilarious.
She glanced at Nyx.
“Ya good bud?”
“All good here. You?”
“I’m Good. Now, don’t think you’re gonna get out of explaining your paw…” The fox frowned, looking away.
“Doesn’t even hurt anymore…”
“Uh-huh. I’m sure..” She rolled her eyes.
“Don’t believe him. He’s a liar!” Naja cried from across the hall, giggling.
Nyx stared in shock at the little girl. Lyn laughed, before her eyes widened.
“Wait…you can hear him?”
“They all can. Didn’t exactly have a choice in the matter…” Nyx grumbled. Lyn sighed, shaking her head, but smiling.
Ah…how she’d missed her friend.
Slowly, she lifted him from her shoulder and set him on the ground, but not before giving him a good long squeeze and a ton of pets.
And kisses.
Which he complained about immensely.
She turned on her heels.
“And now…”
She ran toward Ara and November, reuniting with her friends, in the form of a large hug that nearly knocked the two over.
Nyx merely waved at November, limped over, and was then lifted into the boy’s arms. The fox nudged the boy’s curls with his nose.
“Hey, Ginger.” Nyx grinned. Someone chuckled.
November sucked in a long breath. “Hi, Nyx.” He gave the fox a couple pets, smiling.
“You have a run-in with those mutts too?” Nyx glanced at him. November looked down at his ravaged shirt. He nodded meekly. “Well, good job for not getting mauled.”
“Uhh…thanks?”
XD!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:13 pm #119448Afternoon fine fellows! (Umm…)
Not-fellows cuz almost everyone on here is a girl!! XD
is anyone on? *taps mic* and for that fact, is this thing on?? XD
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke @keilah-h#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:27 pm #119449I’m kind of, sorta, not really on right now, as I’m supposed to be doing math homework. (I’m homeschooled so is all my work homework?)
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 14, 2022 at 1:40 pm #119450@koshka hmmm I guess it is!!!
Do u wanna RP in a few minutes??
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:56 pm #119451October 14, 2022 at 2:37 pm #119455Wait…
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-hHow many of you are fellow homeschoolers?
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorOctober 14, 2022 at 2:44 pm #119456@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The fight was over, but…this was a mess. The guards had retreated, taking their wounded with them. Several in the group were injured, although none seriously. He caught sight of Zlatan looking for something to clean his blade and hands on.
“Ah, someone move the young folk farther down the hall.” Mikkel dug out his medical pack. Not that it was actually his.
Thankfully no one was serious. He had no idea how to treat anything worse than minor scratches and abrasions.
Vulkasin
Well, hadn’t that been exciting! He grinned and gave a flourishing bow to his brother.
“Vulkasin, take off your boots.”
“V’hat sort of greeting is zat?!”
Zlatan frowned, but the corner of his eyes crinkled. “So I can see how badly you got mauled.”
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 14, 2022 at 2:45 pm #119457October 14, 2022 at 2:53 pm #119458@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @e-m-trepke who wants to go next?
also Vesper will have to introduce himself. And maybe not mention Corvina’s name XD
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