Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

if it makes u feel any better….we’re really looking forward to it??

That does help. XD

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w

By the way, I’ve figured out that Reúven has a hardship license (because of his father’s paraplegia). Also, because his and Liora’s families know each other so well, him giving her a ride is nothing uncommon.

ALSO!!! I kinda feel the need to explain what sounds rather funny in our…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter (I sense someone is on the trail. XD XD) @keilah-h @wilder-w

I had an RP half finished when my phone glitched off and it poofed away.

I’ll just have to rewrite it.

@freedomwriter76 @wilder-w @koshka @godlyfantasy12

I’m on and about to RP. Sorry it’s taken a bit.

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w

Winton

He set a box of plastic cutlery beside the space where the pizza would go. The fruit and vegetable tray was in the little fridge in the corner of his office. Everything was basically ready.

Chairs for the club members were set around a long table in the center of the room. The…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@freedomwriter76

Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)

So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.

@freedomwriter76

That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…

I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD

But the one to one conversations are priceless!

Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂

@freedomwriter76

Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!

And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.

The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

With November? No! At least, not my guys. They’re fair enough to not expect everyone else to be completely open when they aren’t.

They will be curious, however, and curiosity mean they will try to find out more.

By the way, is Corvina still in the shadows?

@godlyfantasy12

I KNOOWWW! 😭 but poor November is in serious trouble!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

By the way, Reúven’s “usual” is a quick, anonymous strike to a nervous shut down point. I thought it might give a decent way to clear off Hitchens for the moment, especially since I can’t see either of my boys, or any of the others in this group, standing still right then. XD

Also, I’m guessing…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 …definitely. @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Viktor

The slug, Hitchens had his blade to Arabella’s throat. Viktor exchanged a wide-eyed glance with Reúven and unlooped his rod from his belt. Reúven had drawn his knife, and was quickly moving behind the man, his eyes glittering.

Then it happened. A wave of terror ripped t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w

This is going to be awesome!

Reúven & Friends

The hall outside the cafeteria reeked of ravioli and broccoli. Reúven wrinkled his nose and considered his choices.

An MRE, or school lunch?

He glanced in the trashcan as they stepped inside.

MRE.

He would rather trust the d…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter @keilah-h @wilder-w

Winton Aetheling

Some people, when they see the evil of the world, hide their eyes and try to forget. Some grow hard and insensitive. But some see it, and without loving the wickedness, reach for those entangled. Those some love even when it hurts, reach even past hope, and don’t give up…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Actually, I LOVE THIS IDEA.

Ok, what if he’s an unofficial-official school counselor? A kind of social worker. Then he’d be in the position to talk to students, and we’ll just say that here he also has the ability to hold small meeting/ club style classes. (There would definitely be food.) Lilith puts up with him because it puts…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

YESS!!!!

So, in the series, Alwin is reached by a man with a burden for the children of the serfs. (Kinda like bus ministry) Alwin, who first comes because there’s food, realizes that they have something. From a very young age he had the understanding that all those who said they served the King were really just serving an empty…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Lol! I get that! I actually prefer that too.

You should have seen what I had written as a going sparking thought for this RP. It used the word “cursor”. XD

Anyway, yeah. I blanked it like that because I was expeirementing with how to say without saying things, but I am WAAYY more comfortable with leaving even the intent…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter @keilah-h @wilder-w

Oh! I was just thinking about what my charries would do at lunch! Y’all are awesome.

By the way, I feel kinda like I need to put on a content warning. Nothing is really stated, but some pretty nasty things are aludes to, including addiction, abuse, profanity, and immorality.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Let’s see…

Viktor

As soon as the man walked up, Viktor heard Reúven’s voice in a low mutter.

“What fine boots. Very much the officer.”

Viktor’s eyes went wide. He spread his feet and gripped his sword, ready. Esen shifted on his shoulders to raise her crest in answer to his…[Read more]

@arien

Oh! I love it. The characters are intriguing, the setting/world is interesting, and the concept is really fun. I want to read the rest!

I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features…[Read more]