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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
That was awesome! I love the camera panning/movie feel. I often imagine scenes like that, so it makes it very satisfying.
(Anyone else create “trailers” to their books in their heads?)
I’ll do a quick reaction.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Mathew, the brown haired boy with the nervous stutter and friendly face, suddenly turned toward Viktor.
“Victor, r-r-right?”
Viktor nods.
“Truth or Dare?”
Reúven was smirking. Dalton was sitting stock still as if lack of movement would make himself invisible. And perhaps it did. Everyone was looking at Viktor now, afte…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Shock tore through Viktor like lightning as a giant window flashed open. His hand flew to his script and sling, but Nadían buried her face in his shoulder, effectively blocking access. He pulled her closer instead, and stared at the window.
Brilliant light poured from it, illuminating the words:
Please be seated. First Backstory beginning for:…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Great to meet you too!
Yes, I have Viktor(a thirteen/fourteen year old boy), Reúven(a fourteen year old boy), Dalton(a youngish black squirrel[with a knife and cloak]), Alwin(an nineteen year old young man), and Percy(also 19 yr old young man).
Of course! You can ask any of them.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sounds good!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Um, mine haven’t been asked by somebody outside their circle. They have done one between themselves, though.
I don’t think @wilder-w’s have gone (Shawn and Fennex). I don’t know about any others.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yes! Viktor does have a sister named Alyna as well, and she’s actually closer to him, but for some reason Nadían wanted to be written here and Alya didn’t, so… Maybe she’ll still turn up, maybe not.
Slowly, Viktor was realizing that he knew a few of the people in the group. There were November and his group, and there were…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h @sarafini
Ok, putting my charries in!
(Which are Viktor, Nadían, and William)
This turned out to be a bit more if an RP style, but it was so much fun to do!
Viktor
The note crinkled in Viktor’s hand and he glanced down at its…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Backstory RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
This does sound fun!
I just realized that Viktor never told any of the others much about his story. Maybe that will be fun to see.
Hmmm….
Also, I love Corvina. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @arien @felicity @koshka @starofthenorth @sarafini @anyone else on here
Same situation here with loss of wifi for a bit,but I’m back! And this was hilarious to read through. I think my favorite was November’s five minute speech on Ara. XD
I have:
Dalton
Alwin
Percy
Viktor
Reúven
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Elishavet Elroi posted a new activity comment 2 years, 1 month ago
Understood! God bless and keep you. Love you too, sister.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Just for fun: charrie edition in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Okaayyyy this looks fun…. (I read the books, but it was on my phone so I couldn’t get scared by perceived length. 😉 )
Ringbearer: me, Aenwest of the Morningstar. (Elf)
Gandalf: I don’t know!? Maybe Sir Winton from Kingdom of Shadows.
Aragorn: Viktor from Heir of Ashes. They literally share personalities. INFJ!! Plus, I guess he is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Go ahead! 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings @arien @felicity @koshka @arien @godlyfantasy12
There is a general lull as nobody is quite sure who should go first. Most certainly not themselves. Then Percy speaks up.
“I’ll go!”
Alwin moans, but otherwise nobody objects. Percy spins on his friend with a grin.
“For Truth I ask, who is your Lady Love?”
“Lady Love?” The…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Me too! It’s one of his hilarious yet undeniably shining qualities. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings @arien @felicity @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Percy would be thrilled to start, if y’all want.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy1 @mineralizedwritings @arien @felicity @koshka
I’M SO GLAD YOU LIKE HIM!!
And, sure! Reúven can join.
*Silence*
I raise my voice. “Reúven can join!”
A tall, reddish haired boy with a faint smell of sheep on his clothing slips in.
“Peace! Thank you for the invitation.” He sits down beside Viktor like an eagle beside his war…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @arien @felicity @koshka
*Squeals with excitement*
Oh, hi.
*Steps out of the shadowy corner*
Yeah, I’ve been kinda lost in the shadows of the Kingdom for a while.
(Sorry I’ve kinda disappeared for a bit…)
Anyway, *cough* I am here! *Throws back hood*
I do believe I have a few characters that…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
XD Wow. XD
That was so cringey but hilariously cute at the same time.
Santa Claus?! XD
*Wipes tears of laughter from eyes*
I’m really not sure how to critique it. The prose is a little choppy, but the story itself is distracting me. XD
Candy cane fingerprints!? XD A magically appearing mistletoe? (That particular bit was pure…[Read more]
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