@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@keilah-h maybe? I don’t know either. XD if you think it’d be good, then go for it. @godlyfantasy12 BY THE WAY, Grimm looks a lot like Alwin. Like, Alwin’s face is shaped a little differently, but their coloring is identical. (Except that Alwin may be slightly darker.) So, they’d look a bit like twins, with the similarities and differences. And, I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I have no idea. XD I have a few ideas about who would be interesting, considering their unique family backgrounds, (not exactly abuse, but not really functional either. For instance, William is disowned.) but they can just lose themselves in the castle for a while if need be.
Or they could run into Mikkel. @koshka
Or anyone else that…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keiliah-h
Ok, so I’m back for a few minutes. I’ve managed to read everyone’s RPs, although I haven’t been able to post one.
That just means I’ve been able to plot … 😏
Alwin and William
The corridors had changed from winding halls of lighted windows to narrow walk ways sulking in shadow. The two…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ahhhhh, hummus. Not whatever else that typo was. XD specifically the kind with olives.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ah…
First off, I MUST HAVE WATER! All my family knows this, and my friends probably do to. Without water, I get headaches and become lethargic. Yeah.
As for food, I like to snack on Humis and pita chips (or any cracker I can find. Just not graham crackers. That is not a good mix.) I also like nuts, specifically almonds, pistachios,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Awww, Riker…
Viktor
He bent his knees and slowly knelt on the stone, careful not to lose his balance. He was still getting used to carrying Esen’s weight.
Among other burdens….
There, now Lily could reach the bird. Esen chortled as Reúven guided Lily’s little hand across her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ok! Take some pictures of squirrels for me! 😉
(To explain. Last time we were at the zoo, we spent an inordinate amount of time watching squirrels steal food from exhibits. XD Then we were like: how was our favorite part the squirrels? We did not come to see the squirrels!)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Oh, Lily… XD I’d want to do the same, though.
Viktor
“Viktor!” The tiny lass looked up at him, pleading with her large, sweet eyes. “Can I pet her?”
Riker started, obviously not comfortable with it. Neither was Leon, if expressions said anything. Esen was a prey bird, after all, and of a dau…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@koshka @freeddomwriter @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Viktor
Riker had walked to the doorway, but Viktor couldn’t tell much of their conversation. At least, he didn’t care to, not right now. His neck was craned and his eyes glued to a spot of dark feathers in the sky above.
Was it…?
Suddenly, a prey bird’s cry fell down to them: the cry of a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 NOVEMBER!!!!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Okay, let’s see if this will make sense. (I hope what I did with Lily works; she’s so sweet!)
Viktor
Lily laughed, making Reúven’s smile grow even softer. The hard edge was gone, all trace swept away to show his cousin’s tender heart.
“I am honored by the title.” He bowed with a wink to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Awwwwwww, no!!!!!
I see why it fits, that doesn’t exactly make it better, but it does. XD
@Godlyfantasy12 freedom
It is like Wingfeather! Although what it really reminds me of is the book Resistance by Jennifer A Nielson. THAT BOOK! (Esther… [..a shot rang out, followed by a splash. Then, even worse, silence.] My rough quo…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Would y'all be willing to vote? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Voted!
Whatever one you choose, I’m sure it will work out wonderfully. Keep up the good work!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Reúven
They were headed out now, on the quest in search of November’s folk. Leon had taken the lead, pulling Reúven and Viktor into conversation.
“So, have you been up to much lately?”
“The usual.” Reúven smirked. “For war and herding, that is. Ay, Viktor?”
“Ay.”
Leon frowned. “You’re still at wa…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh, and *Raises hand* we have church on Wednesdays too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
So… What is planned for Paxton and Leo and the rest?
My surmises that
canshould be corrected are:- Paxton runs into Leon and my shepherd boys, or
- He runs into someone else. (If nobody is defined, he can run into Alwin and William… But only if you don’t have any other ideas.)
- Leo is…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Understood! We’ve been intending to dress up for a Civil War reenactment nearby, but making the clothing has been a long process. (Of mostly 1. Explode with ideas. 2. Buy supplies and dive into sewing. 3. Need more supplies and realize they’re too expensive. 4. Set it aside. 5. Repeat.)
That would be amazing! If you do end up…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sounds super fun! I really like the characters.
As for ideas….
Any specific directions in mind?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 awww, thank you so much! I’ll tell them. 😉 And poor, sweet Paxton. @freedomwriter76 I hope your back gets better; I’ll be praying for you. Spinal problems are hard. @keliah-h @koshka
Reúven
Prison. He’d been there a few times over the years. It wasn’t a good place, but it was better than the alternative.
He smiled a slow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy yes, Viktor does have fire trauma, even though he’s gotten used to it because it’s a necesary part of their life. He just… Doesn’t like to handle it, or have it get more than a cooking fire. It makes him jittery and anxious, which for him means he’s more prone to exclamations and studied silence.
Also, I…[Read more]
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