Elishavet Elroi

@queen_of_alvastia

Wow! Tala is gorgeous! I’m not particularly a dog person, but she’s beautiful…

Now…

Yosí will completely freak out due to some exposure to war dogs, but who knows, maybe he needs to meet a nice dog. Personally, I can’t wait to meet her!

This is awesome! I’ll have to think about to figure it out though…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

YES! The Heirs of Ashes Forever!!! Reúven was probably the first character of mine that really just stole my heart right off the bat. Now Yosí is starting to.. XD

@joy-calle

but I do want to shout out @elishavet-pidyon ‘s Alwin and Win…

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@freedomwriter76

That’s okay. 🙂 We’ll miss them, but we’ll survive. *Sniff*

Although, villains? O.O

@queen_of_alvastia

Hi! Welcome to the little passage of insanity! There’s nowhere else in the Castle quite as… Um… Something. I’m sure there’s some great filament of uniqueness here.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I know I’ve said this before, but I love y’all ‘s charries. Grimm and Riker are both so sweet…

This side plot with Riker and his lost son makes me want to bring in Edria and Amicai, since they would sympathize soooo much (since they lost their first two kids). But they’ve been dead for nearing eleven years now,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter

Lo and behold, I hath ariveth! From whence I came I canna tell an to where I go tha na cratur canna…

Ok, I don’t know how the Florid Sword turned into Donal Grant, but the point is that I am here for the moment, and I offer my apologies for my absence.

(Note: HAVE ANY OF Y’ALL READ SIR GIBBIE BY GEORGE…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 It makes me so happy that you like him so much.

I would like to.

Yosí

They called the boy their Snowflake. It did fit his white hair and blueishly pale complexion, although it might have been given him for more reasons. Snowflakes were beautiful and precious, and they were never the same.

His large blue eyes…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Sorry y’all, I’ve been really busy lately. (There was a Quiz Tournament this weekend.) Things are also going to continue busy for… A long time. XD I should still be able to do one RP a day, but… We’ll see. As of right now, if I don’t RP just put Yosí wherever it’s convenient. 🙂

Also!! I think I might have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 THANK YOU. I feel that way about your writing, actually. You write a character’s mind SO WELL. 🙂

It was thrilling to write! XD

But NOVEMBER…. *gasps in worry*

Yep, Yosí is definitely going into “please let me help” mode now.

Fun fact, because of the way he watches out for the other captives, he has a little stash of m…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

These characters…. *Weeps*

… they’re awesome and they don’t even know it.

Yosí

The strategy was set; the battle growing near. Little pricks of madness were sparking in the back of Yosí’s mind as all else fell into focus.

This man, Yosí knew these men.

“November!” Grimm’s voice echoed through the passag…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

So I was close on Naja! (I thought she was around elevenish.[I just wasn’t sure, so I went with actions that were young, yet I sometimes do at my great and notable age. 😉 Which just goes to show how well I write ages.. [and why I love Children’s Ministries.].) I was wondering how old Jonathan was, though.

But…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! (screams a garbled mix of Bible verses, Hebrew, and elvish, because that’s what my day’s been like. XD)

But still. I AM FURIOUS.

HITCHENS us about to be tackled by several whirlwinds of characters. XD

Yosí

Safe? He gave a short laugh.

“Who knows, maybe I’ll die!” He grinned until he realized…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Three things.

Grimm is amazing! He has earned himself a very loyal friend just now.

And – WHO DOES HITCHENS THINK HE IS, A MADMAN? If so, then he’s right.

Second, IT’S LEON!!! I love that guy.

Also, if the others come right smack into this…. O.O

Anyway…

Yosí

“What’s he look like?”

He stumbled, the li…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Yosí

His mind stumbled a bit before gathering all the names. The little girl named Naja watched him with large eyes, innocence glowing in her face. Even the grave man, aptly named Grimm, seemed kind in his way. Yosí slowly let out a breath.

Right.

“We were just searching for some food for the rest of our gro…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

THANK YOU AND YESSSSS! They really do need to.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

I’m so excited I’m struggling to get my fingers to write this.

Also, he kinda thinks about what he’s gone through, I don’t know if it would be icky or not, but just thought I’d mention it.

Yosí

Oh, he was a fool. Yosí let out a short laugh as he watched the latch swing… The broken patch swing…. In the wi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Interesting question, and I can definitely see where you’re coming from. I think we want to teach our readers something through all our characters, not the least being the villains. Because of this we often want our reader to sympathize with the villain a little, but this isn’t always what’s needed. It depends on what role your…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

So it seems to go, starting from the conversation on whether and how to add Yosí, like this:

Pg. 324

1. My intro RP for Yosí
2. Freedom’s RP for Leo  (which was super cute!)

Pg. 325

1. Godly’s RP for Paxton (also adorable; I love Paxton.)
2. my 2nd RP for Yosí

And that may or may not be right, considering RPs lik…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I think it’s either yours or @freedomwriter76 ‘s.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ok, so I think Yosí kinda gets “found” by the good searching group. Then they would head as a whole back to the others, having pilfered provisions from the storeroom he’s in(unless that feels too convenient/isn’t what y’all had in mind.). Other than wonderful conversations, I don’t have much of an idea. XD

@everyone

Let’s see….

Alwin

His voice hung in the air for a moment before vanishing beneath the noise of the crowd. Alwin frowned and began to search the room for someone who wasn’t occupied by food or friends, someone who would hear him over the din.

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