Elanor

iluvhim18

Okay.
So your saying 9pm eastern time?

@iluvhim18

Here’s the last sentence I wrote.

“No, I will not, I am not going to that “peaceful meeting” and I am  definitely not letting that tyrant marry my daughter simply for the sake of their being “peace” between our countries!”

I didn’t realize how dramatic that sounded when I wrote it earlier. But there you go.

@iluvhim18

Oh yeah… Because people might decide to leave off on an impressive note just to make what they send in more interesting or funnier. So anyone (myself included) who puts entries in here needs to be careful not just to write an amazing profound statement just for the sake of putting something here. 😆

@iluvhim18

Ohh I love this idea! It will not only be a source of daily amusement of how our lines all fit together (or don’t really fit but are squished together anyhow 😆). It will also be another motive to write so that we can add something new every day.
And see what happens to our book’s lines. 😆

@anika123

It works now. Thanks. 🙂

I read to the end of what you’ve written and I’m greatly enjoying it!
The changes you made improved it greatly. It is flowing nicely. I can’t say there’s anything at this point I noticed that needs changes. 😁

@scripter-of-kingdoms

I love your nickname Kadotake!

I went to read the updated version of what you’ve written but the link didn’t work.

That actually sounds more interesting than what I thought my last sentence was.

Ooh love the combined writings.

Okay so I haven’t written in a while but *goes and finds and copies it* here you go. *Pastes it*

“There is only one thing that we have not done.” said another hesitantly as if what they were about to say would not be received very well, especially not by Rondor, “But I do not think that it will bode well with most of you.”

@lydia-s

Oh, he sounds beautiful!

Okay. Yeah, I had to read the Lord of the Rings before I watched the movies (along with my sister who was very impatient at how long it took me. By the time I’d almost finished the Fellowship she was just finishing the Return of the King 😆). So I read through them then and have been hooked ever since.

I would…[Read more]

@abigail-m

Thanks! She was the horse my family used to have she was born on our farm and we had her for 4 years. My mom and I broke her to ride which was a lot of fun.

No worries. Thanks for the welcome. 😁

Questions are great.

I am just starting up writing after a long time of not writing. So some of these questions I’m not wholly sure on yet.…[Read more]

@ariel-f

Hi Ariel. (Really pretty name btw)
I actually haven’t read any futuristic science fiction books. Just watched a few movies.  I’ve seen a few books at the library from time to time but they weren’t by Christian authors and they looked pretty weird.
Though I love the topic of futuristic stuff. Lol. I love reading in the different Bible…[Read more]

@anika123

I will read it once I’ve got the time and get back to you. 🙂

@kathleenramm

I’ll try my best to write out the process I used. It’ll probably be a bit rambling. Lol.

So first I picture my main characters and divide them according to their appearance hair and eye color, skin tone, height, etc.

Then according to that I divided them into people groups. Then I came up with a country for each group of peo…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Yes she was! Her coat was a tobiano paint and she was half Gypsy Vanner half Arabian.

Yes Tolkien is such a great writer. Reading the Silmarillion really gave the rest of his books a whole new light for me. Also if you want a SAD read I’d suggest The Children of Hurin. That book actually brought tears to my eyes (now that is a GREAT f…[Read more]

Also, maybe add more actions done by the characters. Motions, expressions, etc. because most of what’s happening is talking.

I’m the kind of reader who likes lots of descriptions when I’m reading it helps me to “see” the story in my mind more vividly. I really like JJR Tolkien’s writings because there are lots of descriptions and background yet…[Read more]

@anika123

The way that they are talking almost sounds stiff like they’re in a formal business sort of a setting, not two good friends talking to each other in an informal setting.

Maybe ask the general forum that question? They’d probably have tips on that. Sorry, I’m not that experienced of a writer.

IDK. Maybe add more of the expressions on their faces?  The dialogues don’t sound like the way someone would speak in real life.