Charityanne

@soleilnaia

An ignorant Canadian such as I shall have to google it. *leaves and googles then returns* Those are some cool looking trees! They look like trees that have fern foliage and mini berries.  The poem is now perfectly clear. 😜

It’s awesome when one can write down poetry right in the moment and in the environment it comes from.

@keilah-h Sounds good! Do you want to go first? 😉

@euodia-vision

Pretty much what Kathleen said. I think if it’s done right any trope can become enjoyable or even awesome.

@power

*bows many times*

I am greatly honored, Black Mongoose. Thank you for holding this tournament!

Yes you can put the poem on here!

Dzienkuje, Merci and Danke.

@princesschronicle @sarafini @charityanne @keilah-h @otherworldlyhistorian

Are any of you available at 3:30 today? It’s our group’s turn to role play!

@loopylin

Yer welcome!

@thearcaneaxiom

Lasi’el  😉

@esther-c

Byron Len is awful! But I like how he’s a “coward” deep down. Like when they mention God he’s like, “Oh let’s move on.”

Asher!!! *grinds teeth* what are you doing??!! I’m interested to see how his conversation with Ev goes….if they can have one without getting into a fight….

@soleilnaia

Thank you! Very much appreciated.

Philippians is such a good book. I love how practical and uplifting it is.

*nod* Yes, lit and writing. I like that better than grammar too. Some people think that since I’m a writer I must love grammar but….nah. Not really. 😅

@esther-c

I’m a crazy imaginative person….and something I’ve found that helps me write transition/description is picturing the scene in my mind. Then I choose one or two things about the scene that make is unique and focus on those.

For instance, if I’m describing a park, I’ll point out the bright orange swing set, or the tens of squirrels…[Read more]

@power

Oh no. I hope I’m not the only contestant! 🙁

@godlyfantasy12

Oof, sorry!! I went to bed really early last night, so I’m just now seeing this.

Asher

“Not at all,” Ara said. She looked around and asked, “Are you alone?”

I frowned slightly, biting my lip before speaking. “I…well…not exactly…my…my…” I trailed off.

My what? He’s…not that…no…he doesn’t think of me as that…

Ara no…[Read more]

Nice!!

Have you heard Lauren Daigles song “look up child”? It’s really good!! I can’t remember the lyrics distinctly, but she’s a Christian artist.

@freedomwriter76

Eddie

“No…we haven’t seen anyone…you’re the first. What are you doing here? Are you friend or foe?”

“I’m a friend.” Eddie said, tugging her yellow sweatshirt down over the stun gun at her side. “I woke up here with my twin sister. I’m just trying to find her so we can go home.”  She paused and nervously wrapped her tail around…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

@keilah-h

“We should all come.” said Ellie, her tail flicking [I just thought that’d be an interesting detail–her tail can twitch back and forth, right?].

Yeah, that’s perfect! Ellie does that a lot, actually, especially when she’s nervous. Don’t be scared to write for my characters.

@esther-c

Oh I read them! I’m interested to know where this is going!

Pls take the following with a very large grain of salt, it’s just thoughts and I have no idea where the series is going. You as the author knows best 😀 !!

It felt a little rushed how everything happened, but I mean it is only a first draft. In the scene with Ami and Ev…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

Dylan

The young man moaned, grimacing.

I frowned and touched his shoulder again. “Hey…”

He jerked slightly at my touch, then tried to push himself up from the floor. He lost any strength that he had and, before I could catch him, face-planted back into the floor .

Oh wow…that’s gotta…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah yeah maybe!!

@esther-c

Ooh interesting!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the link of the video!! I’ll check it out 🙂