Charis

@sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

@jenwriter17  @kaya-young  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

@kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

anyone on? I’m on early because my mom is on the math computer, and so I don’t have anything to do.

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

@catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed

@rochellaine, maybe. I’m going to submit it to the Story Embers contest, so I don’t know yet

@seekjustice,

I’m back

@daughteroftheking  Ooh!  I like it.  🙂

Don’t mind me, I’m just quickly explaining myself

@rochellaine, The first few times I saw the prompt I rolled my eyes because there was no way I was going to endorse doing bad and still coming out the winner. But then the twist came to my head and I figured out how to write it without that being the theme.

@seekjustice, things are going pretty good, other than the fact the the stinkin computer doesn’t want to work. But I have coffee so I’m happy

@rochellaine, I am being unwise and instead of working on Decisions, am writing a short story called Dear Santa. I got the idea from a writing prompt. basically the kid has one day to get on Santa’s naughty…[Read more]

@seekjustice, @rochellaine, hey y’all. I’m here fro about 10 minutes before work

@kaya-young  THANK YOU!  And I love that seal…  🙂 🙂 🙂

I will post more parts after I get a few more people to read it.

@catwing  @daughteroftheking @kaya-young @notawriter

Here’s another one I made for a character from my Superhero WIP…she’s one of my favorite characters, though I don’t yet know her as well as some of the others.  🙂

@jenwriter17  I know this a late response, but I have had this same “issue” (if you can call it that).  🙂  It has bothered me that I can’t get past a certain number of words for a story.  What I’ve come to realize is that I just need to write what is necessary.  If my story is finished in 30,000 words, so be it!  And the next round of editi…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, see you later