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@seekjustice Haha! I guess you do, don’t you! 😀
I’m going to go now. I’ll probably be back tonight around the usual time. Hope to see you then!
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
Okay, see you later 🙂
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@rochellaine, maybe. I’m going to submit it to the Story Embers contest, so I don’t know yet
I’m back
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and grey@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…)IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
@seekjustice Welcome.
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and grey@alia Yikes… Hope you feel better soon.
Good night then.IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
@catwing Cool! How’s it going?
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
(It will only be Alex, Jack, and Cele. Mostly…)IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
Ah, I’m terrible at show don’t tell! And passive voice…urgh!
I have to delete a few characters from my WIP since there’s so many and quite a few are redundant. still, they’re my babies and I love them. I’m sad to see them go 🙁
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
@catwing Oh well then, your lucky 🙂 I can imagine that they’d get tangled up though! I’m tangled in plot holes at the moment *groans and headdesks*
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
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