@bluejay
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks, @elanor ! 😀
You grasped the concept of my poem perfectly! I’m glad you enjoyed it and found it relatable. 🙂 Because it’s very personal, I really wasn’t sure if anyone would be interested in it. I’m glad I decided to share it!
I’m still working on those last lines. I’m torn between fleshing them out and changing them a bit to better…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks, @light-warrior-pen ! I’m glad you liked my imagery. 😊
The subject is me, the author, and the boat and sea is a fictional, metaphorical dream I used to describe the feeling of living in myself, I suppose. (Although I was next to the sea and I have been in wooden boats many times. My da is a fisherman, so.)
I’m glad you pointed that out…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey, everyone! This is my most recent, completed poem. Please critique it and let me know what you think! I’m looking for feedback an all aspects of the poem (including the name, and consistency of imagery), so don’t be shy if you have any thoughts to share. (I’m working on sharing my poetry more often and seeking regular feedback.)
Thanks!
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
Nice poem, @acancello! And I like yours, @mineralizedwritings, and the Masked and Victory poems, @elanor. 🙂
I haven’t written any lately, I’ve been so busy with work. Maybe I’ll write one this weekend.
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Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@seekjustice YOU’RE HERE!!! 😀 Yeah I totally understand haha!
I’m not too bad. I’ve been focusing my energy on drawing and other things instead of writing over the past few years, although I do have an idea for a writing project that I just need to get over the writer’s block for haha. How’ve you been???
@euodia-vision Yeah, it’s a place to…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I would like to bring this back once again. Good place to chat while you’re working on stuff. It’s supposed to help people be motivated to write if they know someone else is doing it with you while also chatting with you……. emphasis on *supposed to*, I’m notoriously bad at focusing when I’m talking to people haha, but I’ve always loved the…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
That’s fun, @elanor! 🙂
This is my most recent poem. Most of my poetry is brief in length. Usually, I get out an idea or a feeling and then stop.
Forgottenings
Sediments of nostalgia shape a place:
Like icing on a cake, wrinkles in a face
Aging, changing, but ever the same feelings,
Nameless emotions, memories stirring
Like ghosts,…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
@artsy-dragon Oh that robot is so cool
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Joy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@keilah-h Hi um I am so so so sorry I’ve been unfaithful with posting here. I’m gonna go ahead and withdraw Hazel for now so Feather can do their own thing.
I’ve always been like this in roleplay-like situations… I’ll be super excited about it, prepare a character, brainstorm ideas, write the first segment…. and then immediately lose…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks, @freedom. Sometimes I have to remind myself that it’s not like I’m slaying a dragon, I’m just writing a book. How dangerous can it be?
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Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I just finished a storybook-ish style piece featuring my “adopted” charries from a fan story I’ve been working on. Fun to work on 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks, @esther-c and @lightoverdarkness6. 😁👍
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m working on convincing my writing to become a book and not just random scribbles. I’ll let y’all know how it goes. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@keilah-h Miitopia is a game, Hermitcraft is a youtube series of a bunch of people playing Minecraft. It’s more interesting than it sounds, trust me haha.
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Joy replied to the topic Fanfics Charries in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
For some reason I feel embarrassed talking about my adopted characters aaa-
Right now I have two, but I had soooo many during childhood from kids TV shows.
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Joy replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I just started writing a fanfic the other day. I’ve had this idea stewing in my head for months which means now that I’m finally trying to write it down I have no idea where to even begin because I have sooooo many ideas and details packed into my brain that I MUST GET OUT ALL AT ONCE BUT I CAN’T-
Plus I admit I haven’t done any creative writing…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@keilah-h Sorry for the wait!
In a flash, Hazel’s club was in her hand and poised to strike.
She knew she shouldn’t have wandered inside. Of course out of all the places she could have gone, this would be the place with the highest concentration of people. What was she thinking. Curse her curiosity…
She slowly started backing away, hoping to…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 6 months ago
@autumnlily Welcome!!! Great to have you! 😀
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