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@jonas

cool!

@jonas

it’s okay! I’ve done that with your tag too lol.

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

btw guys it’s really cool that you’re siblings and both love writing! My sister hates reading and only writes when forced to (she’s eleven), and my brother only writes because he sees me write, but that’s only every couple years or so (he’s seven years old)

I had to teach myself how to write and can’t really talk…[Read more]

@jonas

Ohhh… 🤔

@jonas

Wait, I thought he was from Ildin?? Maybe you never said that and I just assumed for some random reason, but I really thought…??

@jonas

Me like. Me like lots.

Same! My favorite is Krenna. It’s really cool how she can split her consciousness!

@jonas

Wait, what happened to Kreshen? 😢

@jonas

Me like. Me like lots.

@trailblazer

Me too XD and a new teacher, yay! I’m excited to see what happens next 😁

@trailblazer

I love it! Charley annoys me, lol (I’m guessing that’s the point!)

@trailblazer

I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.

I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]

@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Ottoline

She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.

“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]

@grcr I love it!!!

Ottoline

“Do not worry,” Amir turned his warm eyes to the trembling boy. “She only shoots deer. Lucky for you.” Lane nodded.

“It’s not my statue,” Ottoline scoffed, rolling her eyes. “I couldn’t care less if you broke it or not.” Lane sighed with relief, brushing the hair out of his eyes.

“Just do not scare her, or she might…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! lol

@grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Ottoline

She stepped inside the building, and stopped dead in her tracks.

“What is this place?” she asked in awe. Brightly colored streamers fluttered from the ceiling, multicolored lights lit up the room, and the stone floor shone. A strange kind of music filled the room. She…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@loopylin

NOOOOOooooo not again 😓

Btw, your signature is hilarious 😂 I love it.

@whalekeeper @everyone

I’m late, but everyone had such good points on this! I love reading about this topic, since that’s something I think about a lot.

Tbh, a lot of my worlds are really similar to each other, and so I haven’t really experimented with this a lot, although it would be interesting to try different things. I usually try to focus…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I really like that scene! Their brother dynamic is so good XD

@acancello

Gotcha! 😁 Tell your brother I said happy birthday! I know, XD it is weird.

Happy first day of fall everyone!!