Beth

I think I’m gonna add Igua Dyke Cloak.

Igua is average height by our world standards. Has green eyes and slightly curly brown hair. Burn scars on the left side of his face. Walks with a limp and cane. Oh, he literally has the imprint of hand burned into his left shoulder (tangle with a fire elf, get burned).

• Hates butter knives
• Has an AI…

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@loopylin

I really like the outfits!

@highscribeofaetherium

WHYYYYY

UGHHH

I forgot what I was gonna say

I know! First person books can either be super good or just…cringe..

@savannah_grace2009

I think Wyoh ate your post.

@theducktator

Ok, good, I was worried that I was losing it for a moment there lol.

@savannah_grace2009

I do not hate first person, I think it can be really good when done properly (I doubt anyone else has read this book, but The Door on Half-bald Hill is an example of this ((oh man I adore that book))). I just think it’s harder to get right tha…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol I was thinking the same thing XD

@everyone

Why do you guys hate first person so much?????

It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!

I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!

Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now

Ignore tag or read on!

Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉 I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.

It’s not p…[Read more]

@everyone

The only rule about charrie amount limit is that you have to be able to keep track of them all. I’d that’s none or ten, doesn’t matter.

@whalekeeper

Yes, to answer your question. Either plan out a section of the adventure, or say the color of grass and sky, then throw a hydra at them or whatever other wacky thing you want.

Like I said, chaotic idea, but fun.

2ax²z

@whalekeeper

I did not forget, I was thinking.

Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you are the author, and every decision you make is p…

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@loopylin

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

@esther-c

I don’t really think I’ll be able to help, cuz I’m completely out of my element when it comes to contemporary.

I don’t know about the first vs. third person problem, but if you have multiple POV characters, I’d recommend that you stick to…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.

And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]

@rae

I love this idea. I haven’t been on much lately but I’d definitely try to get on more to participate!

@highscribeofaetherium Sorry, spelled your tag wrong

@loopylin

When Dante returns, he will most likely find Jr in the room trying to figure out how to read the note. Jr has a vast knowledge of languages, but this language he can only speak and understand, reading is basically impossible for him (he probably recognizes words here and there, but otherwise nothing)

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I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃

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