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@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@jonas

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Thanks for asking!!!!

It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD

And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭

The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

How did they go?

@savannah_grace2009 How are you doing?

@the_lost-journal

I’m praying.

@linus-smallprint

This is very interesting. I hope you continue with it! You can tag me if you do!

(also, I love Scythe!)

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!

Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.

If you add to it, please tag me!

@the_lost-journal

Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

Would you like me to add you to the Part 2 doc?

@ellette-giselle

Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)

@jonas

I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!

@whalekeeper

Ohhhh that makes more sense.

And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…

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@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

@ellette-giselle

I would love to!

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu