@beth-torres
Active 1 week, 6 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Sorry, I was literally preparing an NDA yesterday (for my beta readers) and then went off to do some other stuff.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel eventually stopped by a short tree. that grew up part of the labyrinth wall. Despite the narrow trunk, which looked like strands of wood twisted together like a candy, the tree had thick…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
XD
Gabriel Mai
“That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
He’d hate her attitude XD, but yes
Gabriel Mai
When the screaming quieted, Gabriel answered. “Pretty much, though I don’t know what a Chee-wa-wa is. Ditching them? I can’t. At the moment, the village I live in has had an increased number of attacks despite the population not growing by a large amount, and a few new varieties of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel shook his head. “It isn’t proper for a Protector to share his secret with many people. Besides, if they discovered my birthmarks, the fact I’m the Protector wouldn’t save me. I’ve already been marked as a demon by my previous village, and they’ve all seen the Protector fight at some point or another.” The red…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 1 week ago
I don’t know who got shot!
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hybridlore replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 1 week ago
Good scene! I’m still not really sure what happened at the end… but yeah, I was expecting the dad to die too. 😅🥲
I like the siblings too (although their names are confusing, haha.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 months, 1 week ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Sorry that I haven’t been replying as soon as usual. A raffle I was hosting on Unvale ended and I’m trying to organize and get the winners their prizes.
Gabriel Mai
“Because it’s a secret, and we aren’t that close. To be honest, the only people I know from that village who I trust not to gossip about it is Master, Isabella and her…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
“No. I don’t have anyone like that. Isabella is simply the one who gives me cinnamon buns while making some sort of banter comment.” Gabriel shook his head.
I will say Isabella most definitely has a crush on him, though he’s oblivious because he has no idea what that looks like XD.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel clapped, genuinely smiling under his mask. “Just like that! No, only the Fourth knows I can throw hatchets. To my acquaintances, they would say I’d be the first one to die if a monster attacked because I have no self-preservation and they think I have no training,” Gabriel chuckled, amused by their opinions. “No,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel smiled softly. “Take a step closer to the tree before you throw again, it should properly rotate and lodge in the tree that way,” He took the hatchet and lodged it perfectly in the tree. He retrieved it for Lucy before speaking again. “I’ve seen such games at festivals. I never participated, though I have been…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
I’ve never done it lol. I looked up a YouTube tutorial.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel patted her shoulder lightly as if to say it was alright, though his own ears didn’t appreciate the sound.
“Nice try.” Gabriel picked up the hatchet, and gave it back to her. “Throw it straight. Take your time if you have to, and don’t put so much force in.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
“I can teach you that as well, but I want to teach you how to throw an axe first. It could come in handy in this labyrinth.” Gabriel removed the cover and checked the hatchet over, then took a few steps closer to the tree, until about 12 feet away. “I think it’ll throw good from this distance. Any farther and it might…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
YESSS!!!!! This is PERFECT right down to thanksgiving in the hospital hehehehe I am actually so happy you wrote that!
When I saw it in my email, I literally screamed and my dad was like “are you okay?” it was really funny, he was very concerned 😂😂
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Esther replied to the topic WARS in the forum Plotting 6 months, 1 week ago
So the idea you got is already pretty good! But if you need more inspo…
The War of 1812 was interesting, because the United States had just won her independence from Great Britain roughly 30 years ago, and then there they are fighting again. But France/Napoleon Bonaparte also played a role in this by pitting the two against e…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Lol! Easton… no… don’t promise all that! 😢 You don’t know what’s going to happen!
Willow and Ruby are so cute. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 (it’s the scene!!) @hybridlore @ummm, anyone, because I can’t remember who all read Worth All the World XD
Working on the third draft of WAtW currently, and I’m adding in a couple of scenes, including this one, inspired by Sara! 😁
It’s unedited and I’m still not sure where it’s going to fit exactly, so it might feel clunky…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
My family doesn’t even celebrate Christmas until Christmas Eve.
Is there a reason why you do that?
I’m just curious because I’m going through an advent devotional right now, and the author introduced me to some of the feasts and celebrations leading up to Christmas (like St. Nicholas and St. Lucia), even though my denomination doesn…[Read more]
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