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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago

@sarafini

I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.
hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@spinner4him

Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?
Ruth posted an update 3 years ago

@euodia-vision Love your location on your profile, lol!
- Euodia replied 3 years ago
  
  @rae
  Why, thank you!!! Do you like Lord of the Rings?
  I love your pfp too! Horses are amazinggggg
  - Ruth replied 3 years ago
    
    Do I love lotr? They are my favorite movies and books! Tolkien is my favorite author! I literally did not like books until I read The Hobbit, and I only read that cuz my big brother kept talking about it. Since then, I watched the movies over and over again, plus read the books twice. After I finish school assigned reading, I plan to read them again.
    - Euodia replied 3 years ago
      
      @rae
      YUS GIRL!!! *high five*
      I’ve only read the books once, but rn I’m working through Lotr a second time. Buuuut, I’ve seen the movies like 8 times. 😂
      Do you like books or movies better? And do you like the hobbit or lord of the rings?
      
      Ruth replied 3 years ago
      
      I like the books, cuz I appreciate good writing and that was the first book that I cried over only two words, “Aragorn dies” and I’ve never had another book do that to me. I’ve cried over those words twice!
      Lord of the Rings, it captures me and Strider was like a game changer for me. i loved his mysterious personality at first.
      
      Euodia replied 3 years ago
      
      Awww! 😭 So like the part where it says Aragorn dies of old age?
      YES!!! I love Aragorn/Strider!!! Some of my fam thinks he’s weird but he’s my favorite Lotr character, besides Sam ofc.
Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

@mineralizedwritings

Love the pic! How do you get that detailing in the hair!!!? I’ve been trying to do that for like years!
Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

@highscribeofaetherium

Thanks, it’s my most recent watercolor of my MC, Nahim (pronounce nay-him never nah-him)
HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

@rae

Woah! that’s cool!
Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Ruth started the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago

Hi. I’m RAE. You can call me Ru or Ruee, whichever.

I’m writing a book called Guardian Angels, a space story, and I would like some criticism on it. By the way, when I do ‘dialogue’ It means he’s thinking that, not saying it. Here is the first chapter…

CHAPTER 1 LAXAN
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled red into the city streets. R…[Read more]
hybridlore replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 3 years ago

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t really know much about abuse effects or anything like that other than I’ve read in books, thankfully. One thing I would ask is, is it absolutely necessary to the plot/character? Because I think that can really easily become a cliched, sort of stereotypical in books, so if you’re just throwing it in there to make the…[Read more]
Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@jonas

**indebted-to-you smile of joy**
hybridlore replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@hanako

Hi Nevaeh! It’s nice to meet you!

I’m hybridlore on here, or just Hybrid, a Christian, violinist, and sci-fi/dystopian writer. I’m also a homeschooler and enjoy doing lots of things! 😁

Okay, maybe you can revive the nonfiction section on here… I don’t know exactly what’s going on over there, but I don’t think it’s used very often.…[Read more]
Ruth replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@hanako

Hi. I’m not much for intros, but I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand…[Read more]
hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@spinner4him

Yeah, I definitely like viola better, because of the sound, I guess. I don’t really know, but it just fits me better.

Yeah, I get that. It’s really similar to violin, just a little deeper, right? I don’t think you have an E string.

My inspiration for my WIP was a bunch of different books and one of my friends, who loves to imagine a…

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HighScribe posted an update 3 years ago

Wow, KP has EXPLODED in activity! We’ve had, like, five new members in the last three days!
- SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied 3 years ago
  
  Yeah, fr!
  Fun fact… one of the newest members, @emma_mcpherson is my friend and classmate from my school!
  - HighScribe replied 3 years ago
    
    That’s cool!
    - SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied 3 years ago
      
      I’m in the process of convincing another classmate to join, no clue how that’s gonna work. She said she has to talk to her mom about it first…fingers crossed that she says YES!
- hybridlore replied 3 years ago
  
  Ikr XD there was a lot of new people.
  @savannah_grace2009
  Cool!
HighScribe replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@hanako

Cool!
HighScribe replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

@hanako

Greetings! Nice to meet you, Nevaeh! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe. I’m Jonas’ sister, as he said. I’m a freshman in high school and I’ve been homeschooled my whole life.

Are you and @grcr siblings?
HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you for clarifying 😅 I probably explained that in the most convoluted way possible lol
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

@sarafini

I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.

Sorry this…[Read more]
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 3 years ago

@sarafini

Okay!

@janellebelovedpig

I agree that it’s the best to have your parents’ on board about the topics you write about but I just don’t really have that. For example, my mom is very sensitive to reading about sad things, so she puts herself in the character’s place when she reads my stories, and it’s just hard for her to read. Same with…[Read more]
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago

@grcr

YAY YOU’RE BACK WE MISSED YOU!!!!! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied 3 years ago

Yeah, fr!
Fun fact… one of the newest members, @emma_mcpherson is my friend and classmate from my school!
- HighScribe replied 3 years ago
  
  That’s cool!
  - SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied 3 years ago
    
    I’m in the process of convincing another classmate to join, no clue how that’s gonna work. She said she has to talk to her mom about it first…fingers crossed that she says YES!
hybridlore replied 3 years ago

Ikr XD there was a lot of new people.
@savannah_grace2009
Cool!

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