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@freedomwriter76

If your readers love the characters enough, I think even with a slower plot, the story will still work! But yeah, I see what you mean.

So, you say that you don’t know what’s going to happen… that makes me wonder, is the sequel absolutely necessary? Like, for the character’s arcs, and everything, or was the story really…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Of course!
@janelle-beloved-pig

Aww, those are so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

Awesome XD I’ll definitely be on here.

@fernweh_grace

Hi Kathyrn, welcome to Kingdom Pen!

I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooled teenager, violinist, and writer. I mostly write science fiction or dystopian ideas, and I love Andrew Peterson and instrumental music as well!

That’s awesome! How long have you lived in Africa? I really like geography and learning other…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @acancello

Thank you so much! She’s my favorite character <3

@trailblazer

I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁

@trailblazer

Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! It looks great!

Have I mentioned how much I like Sef’s name?

@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium

this is my favorite moodboard I’ve ever done. I’m new to this, but I love this one! She’s one of my MC’s.

@trailblazer

Yeah, for sure! If you want to develop characters more, character questionaires have really helped me. Here’s one I found and have used: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/

I love everyone’s personality and how the older brothers want to protect their little sisters. It’s so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

thanks for the tips!

@mineralizedwritings

Awww I’m sorry! I hope things get better!

@light-warrior-pen

thank you! I love Sef and Lilitu, they are SO CUTE <3

@trailblazer

I hate misunderstandings with teachers! That’s the worst! I feel so bad for Albert 🙁 and I’m so happy they protected Libbie and Etta!

@freedomwriter76

I’ll be praying too! I hope both y’all’s dads find new jobs soon.

@light-warrior-pen

I wanna say watch proposal videos but search results for that might be a little weird, idk lol. I would say try to make it specific to the characters –if you can, maybe give them an inside joke or something like that, or maybe one of them quotes something the other said earlier, if that makes sense. I love scenes like that 😊

@mineralizedwritings

Praying for you and hoping you heal and get better soon!