@beth-torres
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Esther replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
I like the development you have so far. As of now, I don’t have many ideas, but I’ll give you some either on Monday or Tuesday. 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’ve only read Little Women so far. I really should read the others. I didn’t know there was a sequal to the Eight Cousins! 😄
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hybridlore replied to the topic Avengers New League: My marvel fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
AWW This was soo good girl!! Also may I just add I love how you put in the end credits scene just like the movies!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Of course, girl!! Glad we can be there for you. 😊❤️
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I love that scene! So cute!! 😊
I love that they’re trying to get the two together. 😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Aw thanks!! I’ll still be on, but I feel a little guilty with all the time I’ve been spending on here so I think I’ll try to slow down a little … you’ll definitely still see me though!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
So I think I might actually take a break from the RP … I’m just about to get pretty busy, and I think I’ve been spending way too much time on here, lol 😅 You guys can just keep going without Anika, I did enjoy it tho!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic What's their name:Blog Tag in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mileralizedwriting @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h
Hey I made one of these to fill out for my characters, and it has some other stuff on it that I found really helpful (I stole questions from some writing blog, I can’t remember who lol) So I figured I’d share!!
Name –
Age –
Wants –
Needs –
Personality –
Family…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
@kyronthearcanin
Hey girl!! I know you’re pretty busy, but if you’re ever free, I would love to run some ideas past you 😉 -
hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Ok! Yeah, I’m really not sprinting right now, trying to fill out character development sheets but I keep getting distracted xD
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Esther posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
acancello @awsumfaith @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @hannahn @hybridlore @janellebelovedpig @landric @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @starshiness @thearcaneaxiom @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22
Hey everyone!! Just a heads up, we have some friends over this weekend, so I don’t k…[Read more]
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Oh gotcha! 😉 No problem, have fun!!
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Alright! I hope you have a good time! 😉
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Thats totally fine, have fun with your friends!
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How’d your weekend go? Hope you had lots of fun!
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We did have fun!! 😊 My friend is actually a writer, so it was super fun to talk about (aka: nerd out over) out books. 😉
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*our books
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Aw, that’s always the best!!
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For sure 😊
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Ok!
Love your new pfp btw!-
Thanks! 😉 I love it too. 😁 I’ve been waiting to upload it, cuz it wasn’t working for a little while.
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Esther replied to the topic What's their name:Blog Tag in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Aww, I love him!! 😊 So cool that he’s Riker’s brother-in-law! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic Progress Chat!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Exactly. 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @sarafini @kyronthearcanin @katthewriter @anyone-else
I might be sprinting in a few minutes if anyone wants to join me! 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Ok sounds good!! 😁 Aww more little kids … 🥰
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hybridlore replied to the topic ✨ New WIP Ideas Forum ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Sorry about the wait! Yeah, it sounds really cool! Maybe I’ll have to try it at some point 😉
No problem!! xD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I think it’s @smiley‘s?? We were about to hike, and then got distracted xD
We can just start the party if you guys want 🙂
Oh yeah xD Do you want to join??
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sneak preview of Tomorrow's War in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Aww Tristan!!!! 😭
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Esther replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’m definitely going to do another draft. XD I think my long-term plan is to have the whole trilogy in the final draft (or the last book close to the final draft) before any of it is published.
I think it kinda falls in between the two. The technology is more advanced (at least outside the Orb), so that is the futuristic p…[Read more]
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Hey! I have actual free time today and tomorrow XD so whenever is great! I’d love to whatever you’ve got. 🙂
To “hear” XD don’t know what was going through my head there 🤣
@kyronthearcanin
Yeah!! Thanks ❤️
So, my idea was kind of that Ania (yeah I’m calling her that now xD) gets asked by her coworker to join them, and they’re the ones who are pulling off some sort of heist. I’m assuming right now that they’re trying to kill a government leader, but I could change it later, depending on how it goes 😉 She at first…[Read more]
Okay this actually sounds really cool! 😁 I love brainstormin XD.
Offering money would be along the right lines for motivation, since she’s taking care of Luca. Depending on how closely she knows the coworker, there are a few different ways you could take this. If they’ve never talked, and he seems nice, she could not exactly trust him, but at…[Read more]
@kyronthearcanin
Thanks!! 😁 I really appreciate you taking the time to write all that out too ❤️❤️
Yeah, so I was thinking she’ll probably know him, but not super well. So at first she’s like, of course not! But then, exactly! she needs money for her and her brother, and she agrees to help them.
Then I was kind of just thinking that either her…[Read more]
Also, one of the other things I was unsure about is the length? I really wanted to finish an entire novel, and I was set on this idea, but I feel like if I don’t have an ending I’m excited for I’ll just… stop xD
So I was wondering if maybe I should just try to aim for a novella or short story type thing? You had a lot of great ideas for the…[Read more]
I like the idea! Do you have any specific questions on the arc back to God?
As for the length, I’d say this idea is a little too much for a short story, though it probably could be pulled off. I’d say the best idea would be, if you are looking for an option besides a novel, a novella. It would be a great theme and arc for that length.
Definitely…[Read more]
Yeah, I was thinking more of either a novel/novella too! Yeah I get it, sorry if its a little confusing xD Basically, I’m just struggling to figure out the plot and I feel a little overwhelmed in all the ways it could go .. I guess I could just start and see where it takes me, but like I said I feel like I’ll be more likely to finish if I have an…[Read more]
So you already have the thematic idea for an ending… Basically her turning back to God and trusting again. The only thing you really need is the real story ending, and how to weave the theme in with that. Maybe there’s a plot twist. The governor paid the men to frame his death so that he could get out of some kind of bad situation. Or maybe Ania…[Read more]
Yep, exactly!! I just don’t really know how I want the story to go, and what would be the most interesting plot.
I’m not even sure I want to write about an assassination XD So I might change it to some sort of heist, or maybe she agrees to help the assassins and then changes her mind later 😂 I do like the characters a lot though, and the arcs.…[Read more]
Ikr? I have a hard time deciding between the multiple paths a story could take… especially with Healer. That’s why it’s taking so long to get a chapter finished 😅.
At the moment I’m trying to switch over to being a plotter instead of a pantser, so I know what I’m getting myself into. The characters, like in yours, are generally the same- Dune,…[Read more]
Yesss I can’t wait!! xD I’m about to do some kind of brainstorming session, but right now honestly I have no idea what I’m doing with plot … I really wanted to just start something by Thursday, but I don’t know if it’s going to work 😅 I’ll update you later if I decide on something though!!