Beth

@acancello

I will let you know if I ever decide to try it!

@trailblazer

I also like badminton!

@acancello

No, I don’t blog, but I might try it someday!

@trailblazer

Hi! You’re going to love KP! 🙂

My name is Sara and I’ve been writing ever since I was about eight years old, at which age I wrote about a 20 page story on Word (looking back, there are some major plot holes, but oh well, i was eight!)

I’m writing an allegory about a fantasy world called Andromeda. I’m trying to get some “beta…[Read more]

@hybridlore

you’re good, haha!

@acancello

I’m looking at your blog right now! 🙂 great ideas! I commented a couple times

I was dizzy yesterday too, but not bad. I’m glad I don’t have stairs in my house 🤣

Yeah I turn 14!

@acancello

I’ll check out your blog! I can’t breathe…lol! I’ve gone through almost 2 boxes of tissues in two days! Another thing that really sucks is that today is my birthday and I’m sick!!!! Yesterday I felt really sick and spent like eight hours straight on KP…😐

@whalekeeper

I’m here! 🙂 Sounds interesting!

@whalekeeper

I take inspiration from every book that I read! Right now, Christopher Paolini is really inspiring me as I read his book Eragon for the second time, because it is SO GOOD! His world building and descriptions are spot-on and it seems like Algaesia could be real! And he published it at age 15!!!! It inspires me that even teens can…[Read more]

@savannah_grace

Ok! Got it!

@highscribeofaetherium

thanks! the second part of fifth chapter is from Ottoline’s POV. It’s supposed to depict when the Pythonos took Ottoline (because Neveah and Ottoline are sisters and Ottoline was taken as a baby)

@savannah_grace2009

Wow! That was a lot 😂 and it’s really good!

I was a bit confused in the second part of the fifth chapter. Was it from Neveah’s POV, or Ottoline’s?

@whalekeeper

Well, I’m not totally sure why they hate the Paynes *yet* but I had an idea that the Paynes represent Isrealites/Jews, God’s chosen people. Also, people tend to judge others based on their looks, and since the Paynes often are deformed, they see them as ugly/inferior, etc.

Ooooh sounds interesting! If you ever post them on the forum…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

this is where you can see updates to my writing! Any critiques you have would be so helpful!

@jonas

Hi 🙂

though this is an allegory, I’m inventing stuff too. I’m using the Bible for “inspiration” and for some of the storyline, but I’m also implementing biblical truths as well. So yes, the part with Kratos is invented.

@whalekeepler

Whaley,

Paynes are half breeds between human and Andromedan. They are often deformed, and they are treated with prejudice by the other Andromedans, causing a lot of poverty because they are treated like dirt. It’s really sad 🙁

What stories do you write?

@whalekeeper

Hi!

I know my profile says “Savannah Grace” but that’s just my pen name 🙂 you can call me Sara

I have been working on a story I hope to get published in a few years. I have it posted on a forum on KP, do you want me to tag you?

I write fantasy/sci fi/allegory books. Here’s a little blurb:

Andromeda-a world who’s beauty is t…[Read more]

Hey guys It’s five in the morning where I live and I’m sick so I just woke up and can’t fall back asleep so I’m bored 🙁