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  • Ruth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    Hi! I’m RAE or you can call me Ru or Ruee

    I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand shake**…[Read more]

  • @jonas

    That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.

    h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]

  • @hybridlore

    Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

  • @hybridlore

    Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

  • @sarafini

    I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

    I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.

  • hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @spinner4him

    Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?

  • Ruth posted an update 3 years ago

    @euodia-vision Love your location on your profile, lol!

    • @rae
      Why, thank you!!! Do you like Lord of the Rings?
      I love your pfp too! Horses are amazinggggg

      • Ruth replied 3 years ago

        Do I love lotr? They are my favorite movies and books! Tolkien is my favorite author! I literally did not like books until I read The Hobbit, and I only read that cuz my big brother kept talking about it. Since then, I watched the movies over and over again, plus read the books twice. After I finish school assigned reading, I plan to read them again.

        • @rae
          YUS GIRL!!! *high five*
          I’ve only read the books once, but rn I’m working through Lotr a second time. Buuuut, I’ve seen the movies like 8 times. 😂
          Do you like books or movies better? And do you like the hobbit or lord of the rings?

          • Ruth replied 3 years ago

            I like the books, cuz I appreciate good writing and that was the first book that I cried over only two words, “Aragorn dies” and I’ve never had another book do that to me. I’ve cried over those words twice!
            Lord of the Rings, it captures me and Strider was like a game changer for me. i loved his mysterious personality at first.

            • Awww! 😭 So like the part where it says Aragorn dies of old age?
              YES!!! I love Aragorn/Strider!!! Some of my fam thinks he’s weird but he’s my favorite Lotr character, besides Sam ofc.

  • Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

    @mineralizedwritings

    Love the pic! How do you get that detailing in the hair!!!? I’ve been trying to do that for like years!

  • Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

    @highscribeofaetherium

    Thanks, it’s my most recent watercolor of my MC, Nahim (pronounce nay-him never nah-him)

  • HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

    @rae

    Woah! that’s cool!

  • Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago

    watercolor of my MC

  • Ruth started the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago

    Hi. I’m RAE. You can call me Ru or Ruee, whichever.

    I’m writing a book called Guardian Angels, a space story, and I would like some criticism on it. By the way, when I do ‘dialogue’ It means he’s thinking that, not saying it. Here is the first chapter…

     

    CHAPTER 1 LAXAN
    Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled red into the city streets. R…[Read more]

  • hybridlore replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 3 years ago

    @savannah_grace2009

    I don’t really know much about abuse effects or anything like that other than I’ve read in books, thankfully. One thing I would ask is, is it absolutely necessary to the plot/character? Because I think that can really easily become a cliched, sort of stereotypical in books, so if you’re just throwing it in there to make the…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @jonas

    **indebted-to-you smile of joy**

  • hybridlore replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @hanako

    Hi Nevaeh! It’s nice to meet you!

    I’m hybridlore on here, or just Hybrid, a Christian, violinist, and sci-fi/dystopian writer. I’m also a homeschooler and enjoy doing lots of things! 😁

    Okay, maybe you can revive the nonfiction section on here… I don’t know exactly what’s going on over there, but I don’t think it’s used very often.…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @hanako

    Hi. I’m not much for intros, but I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand…[Read more]

  • hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @spinner4him

    Yeah, I definitely like viola better, because of the sound, I guess. I don’t really know, but it just fits me better.

    Yeah, I get that. It’s really similar to violin, just a little deeper, right? I don’t think you have an E string.

    My inspiration for my WIP was a bunch of different books and one of my friends, who loves to imagine a…

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  • HighScribe posted an update 3 years ago

    Wow, KP has EXPLODED in activity! We’ve had, like, five new members in the last three days!

  • HighScribe replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @hanako

    Cool!

  • HighScribe replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

    @hanako

    Greetings! Nice to meet you, Nevaeh! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe. I’m Jonas’ sister, as he said. I’m a freshman in high school and I’ve been homeschooled my whole life.

    Are you and @grcr siblings?

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