Beth

@thearcaneaxiom

Sure!

@jonas

I would say it completely depends on relevance to the main plot. Is she going to have future interactions with the main cast? Will her actions have an impact on the overall story? If not, then I would say it would be best not to, but there is another option.

Yeah, she’s going to play a part in the story.

That makes sense, I’ll experiment I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Only read this if you want too…but look how outdated the style is!!! I can’t believe I used to write like this, and that was just last year! CRINGE. This is one of the only scenes that I teared up during…and i still don’t really get why. It’s not that good tbh…

Jorryn

After what seems like at least a million more steps…

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@freedomwriter76

made me cry so many times writing it tho! XD

I haven’t actually cried while writing any stories (though I have a feeling that my current WIP will do it sometime soon as it deals with abuse, romance, and evil in general and some parts are sad!).  I once wrote a sad chapter last spring for a school assignment about this boy who was…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Hey, it’s me again, lol. I have a question. Is it fine to give a side character a POV if it’s for one or two chapters?

Here’s some context. If you guys remember Liv from chapter 5 (where Lilitu steals bread), I was thinking she could play a part in Lilitu’s story. She’s kind of secretly supporting the Paynes and I wanted…[Read more]

@acancello

I should have the next scene done by tomorrow for the RP 🙂

Oooh I’m excited! I’ll wait to write mine until you post it, because I don’t want to accidentally have the same idea, lol. (And I RP way too much on here, lol)

@janellebelovedpig

AHHH! I think Sarafini left us! NOOOO! All her posts say anonymous and I can’t see her profile 🙁

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s really small! and 500 is just the population of the town! There’s 12 kids in my class and 120 kids K-12!!!!! It’s kind of crazy compared to some where the graduating class is like 600. There were 6 seniors last year!

You can do something ou don’t like for a little while, and she might appreciate it if you played p…

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@freedomwriter76

Oh my gosh…that is so sad!!!! what makes it even more sad is that is an accurate representation of how the war was, and that is how some people had to live.

WOW. Girl, you’re amazing for finishing it! When you get it published you should send me a signed copy, lol.

@thearcaneaxiom

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

I didn’t notice that before, but I went back and looked, and yeah. I guess she’s not on the forum anymore?

Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very confusing, though. Were the parts in p…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

What I could really use prayer about right now is fear though. My dad wants my sister and I to be safe, but his way of doing that growing up was to make me scared of bad things in the world. It’s really bad, and one of the lasting effects of his way of parenting, the thing that’s hardest to forgive him for. It’s hard to forgi…

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@thearcaneaxiom

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Yes! I was hoping she didn’t leave….maybe she got her account deleted or smthn?

I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”.  that was great!

@grcr

SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS MEEEE!!! <3

@smiley

*Gasps* I love the blue theme, and oh my word she has blue hair!!!!

I’ve always wanted to write a character with colorful hair XD

Thanks!

She’s part of a race that has blue hair, blue eyes, blue skin, and the power to manipulate water. I am so happy with how it turned out!

@mineralizedwritings @grcr @freedomwriter76  @smiley

Aww guys thanks so much!

Freedom, it seems like everyone knows about your charries…but since I’m new (and forgive my lack of knowledge, lol), care to share what your WIP is about? I know it’s about WWII, and have read some of your snippets, but I don’t know very much… and your boards are…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah…I guess we did kinda get WAY off topic…(which I don’t mind, lol) but when we get back on track I’ll tag you, haha

@freedomwriter76

I soo hope everyone forgives each other tho 🥺

It’s late, and I always brainstorm before sleeping cuz especially when I was younger I had a hard time getting to sleep. I basically made up my own bedtime stories. I met my greatest characters late night or technically early in the morning i.e. midnight XD. So tonight’s project:

Can…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’m doing…okay, I guess. thanks for asking!

It’s hard for me to force myself to be social, especially with people who I have nothing in common with and who think I’m a little mentally insane because of how much I write (which they might be right…). I’ll talk to myself while I’m writing in class and stuff, so…yeah.

My…[Read more]

@hanako

Thanks for showing up. I was thinking it would end up as just Power and I.

I really like the idea of warriors that are trained from youth to fight great battles. I think warrior stories are great ways to include moral values and examples of great and poor character.

Yeah, me too. I created the Realn for that reason. Well, that and it was…[Read more]