@beth-torres
Active 5 days, 18 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Hmm… it does seem like a lot, but idk. I don’t really have any comments rn, except ‘cool’. XD
(I’m very helpful, am I not? *sarcasm*)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!
You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭
Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333
OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!
Thanks for reading it <33
I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry, I completely forgot that I didn’t reply to this 🤦. I’m still interested, please tag me for the next part when you get to it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Aww, so sweet!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh my goodness, yess, they are adorable!! And—at least the oldest two—look so much like their parents!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Why did you have to make is so saddd?! 😭
(That’s such a rhetorical question. XD)
Yeah, I think the pictures went to the music well and I didn’t mind the repetition. I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
But that’s all. And whe…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Lukas
He tried to make his laugh sound casual, only succeeding in a voice crack— again. He cleared his throat and steadied himself. “Yeah…”
I’m not sure how to make Xandro find them, so you can do that if you want.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@trailblaer @savannah_grace2009 @rae @whoever-else
I’m sticking around for sure, just not sure what charries I want to put in. Agh! It’s so hard to chooseee XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!! He’s so much fun to write 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Haha, I love that!! XD I try to make readers squeal often whenever I have an Everdala scene in my book.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
Small droplets of sweat rested upon Nahim’s face. Parts of his shirt were soaked. Smeared streaks of grease and oil from his hands and forearms, absent of gauntlets and gloves, marked his pale face. What time was it? He didn’t know, but it couldn’t have been a full thirty hours yet.
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I mostly made up charries then because at night I had loneliness issues, even though I’m a sibling child. Even now, the night is when my charries chat.
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I knew they existed, but I didn’t watch the Marvel movies until I was, like, around 14-15 or so lol. 😂
XDXD that is very funny to me cuz I am 14!
If you didn’t watch marvel movies with her she would’ve been watching disney princess movies like every other girl
I never liked Disney princesses…the only one I like is the 2…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think I’ll keep Ottoline. Since Marcurious wasn’t here originally I don’t think I’ll keep him.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s so cute! I love Ev <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It was so sweet! <333
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, I think Lillen will work fine, too, and I will most likely be keeping my character in.
I agree with Jonas, we definitely need to keep this one more open if we want it to survive.
Hmm… I think that idea sounds cool, but for some reason it seems to me like it might not work?? Idk. I don’t really have any ideas mys…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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