Beth

@freedomwriter76 That is super exciting! I cannot wait to see it published and read it! 😁 Congratulations!

Oh good, it posted. KP was acting weird for a bit and I was afraid it hadn’t posted. 😬

@liberty

Alrighty, let’s do this.

I’m not in any way the most amazing writer or editor ever, so I recommend to take my advice with a grain of salt. 😉

Brightening the somewhat pale sky, the golden sun streamed beams of light all about

Ok, the first thing I noticed was the word ‘somewhat.’ In most cases, you can always cut this from narrati…[Read more]

@rae

Ooh, that’s an interesting idea… If you want to, I say go for it!

@freed_and_redeemed

For real though, I would do the same thing. 😂 I’ve imagined the moment I get to hold my very own book in my hands and now you are so close to that!!🥹😆

@liberty

ooh, that’s so exciting!! I’ve been wanting to try my hand at some contests this year as well.

So I read it through once, but I don’t have the time rn to give you some feedback. I’ll be sure to get to it later today though!

@freed_and_redeemed

That’s great!

YES, WE NEED UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep on goin’ Girl!

I’m officially jealous and excited for you at the same time XD

Just curious, but what editing team are you doing? I’ve kinda been researching here and there for when I actually start needed someone to edit…even though that’s like two or…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

oh boy, here we go…

Jr

Someone tapped his shoulder. Jr tensed, reaching fr a knife and spinning around with a violent action. He barely heard the person’s question. When it finally got into his thick skull, he relaxed, sliding the knife fully back into its sheath.

“Kinda,” He replied, attempting to look more friendly than…[Read more]

*happy dance*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ahhh!!!! I’m so excitedddd!!! 😆✨

@freed_and_redeemed

For sure!! 😄

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww, thanks so muchhh!!!

I totally forgot about this topic and I will return later today with more chapters 🤭

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, so that sounds AWESOME!!!

I’m going to have to find that and watch it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

C L I N T!!! What are you DoINg?!?!

The poor boiii 🥺

Ok, I might RP Ami’s reaction later today.

Wait—

Oh my goodness, I just realized that the last time I had rped her she was in her dorm talking with Ellie! Ahh!! She was in two places at once. 🤣 My bad 😅

@smiley

Ok! You’re totally fine. (: I’ll figure somethin’ out 😉

@freed_and_redeemed

Oooh, really? Which one was it? I think the only other movies that he’s played in that I can think of off the top of my head are the Mission Impossible movies.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, I’m good with that. 😊

@rae

*joins you in evil author laugh*

@freed_and_redeemed

One small critique, if you don’t mind…

Tony rolled his eyes and faced Bruce Banner. “Why didn’t you tell us this girl was here?”

I think this would honestly be a great time for one of Tony’s nicknames that are random, only used once or twice, and don’t make sense. Such as

Tony rolled his eyes and faced Bruce Banner. “Why…

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@loopylin @esther-c @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @anyone

Okay, I’ve been thinking…

I’ve decided the foster system people (not sure if this would be a real-life foster thing, haven’t looked it up, but this is fantasy, I can have some liberties) sent him to boarding school because there’s trouble and friction going on over him.

I’ve been…[Read more]