Beth

Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!

Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.

@trailblazer I don’t know much about this time period, but I really enjoyed it so far! It does draw you in.

I feel like it’s hard to have character development within one chapter, but I’d be interested to see where this goes! Please tag me if you post more ! 😉

@loopylin @rae

It’s official. Chase is a Disney princess.

YESSSS!

@loopylin

It’s okay. XD, you would giggle in delight at my first reaction when I read that. My surprise was as great as when Axiom asked what tastebuds tasted like when I first joined KP, XD

Yes, shape shifting helps, but before he knew he could shape shift, since the time he was born, he’s always had a fantastical connection with animals. Part…[Read more]

@rae

Yikes.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ummm sorry I disappeared….

But I did see this post, just didn’t respond.

I have been praying for you and your Grandma and hope everything gets better <3

*hugs*

@esther-c

I am soooo sorry I just disappeared! I’ve been getting really busy…is there anything I need to be caught up on before I RP Liv again???

@loopylin

WHAT?! No! Wait, who…

Would you like me to explain Chase’s connection?

@jonas

I’m gonna ignite over this, you have majorly downplayed Grathmere!

Well, just because Grathmere would prefer to kill everyone doesn’t mean he would. For one thing, I doubt he could beat all of our characters, and for another, Koshtin (assuming he’s still in this RP) probably wouldn’t want that.

Grathmere could kill Black Sky if he wished…[Read more]

I’m still debating whether to add a villain and if so who to add… 🤔

Oh wait, never mind.

Sorry, just saw @princesachroncile22 ‘s post, and realized that Javan also wears suits and acts very polite and like a gentlemen. Maybe we don’t want two of those ..

My best spy/villain is in prison on Realn, and betrayed Nahim. He’s out of the question.

Grathmere…okay, so he’d be the best spy out of all of mine, except…he’d prefer to kill them all (especially Nahim) so the rp would die pretty quickly. Rigere and Angere might work, but I think the best might be Javam Ram.

What do you guys think?

@keilah-h

If Snake is a famed person, and you entered a villain from years after his death, would not the culture by then have maybe painted his image like that of the most desirable? For instance, many Greek hero depictions follow the most desirable physical and spiritual traits of the time.

@whalekeeper

Sorry, pressed the button prematurely.

Chase (continued)

His aunt. He had an aunt. For real. Legally. The sister of his father.

No. 

He wanted to be Chase Duke Marshall, not Chase Duke, charge of Ms. Duke. He didn’t want to be back in his father’s family, for all he knew all of them were bad blood. His father had died. Dead.…[Read more]

@loopylin

It’d take a lot to get Chase to join, but maybe he will.

@whalekeeper

Don’t worry. I had never written Chase POV before this either, and Jr is a confused mess. I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible! Sorry, I…[Read more]

@liberty

Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD

Aaaaaaand… looks like Wyoh ate my post.

*sighs*

Anyways, I asked if the font is weird for anyone else?