Ava Coulter

@scripter-of-kingdoms Aaah, your drawings look AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! 😀

@ribbonash

would not be opposed…

(Lol)

@sparrowhawke

This is difficult territory you tread… but if you were to jump in and honestly I wouldn’t judge you jfoaewuiar;sdf ye I would suggest starting season one up until like, episode four, then jumping to the beginning of season three(imma rule breaker, I feel so dirty now). Season one and two were all over the place, season three was…[Read more]

Yeah, I’m terribly late to this . . . .

This is a really great topic and I love everyone’s advice!!! I needed some tips for making fantasy maps, so I’ll totally be checking out that website and book!!!

And those were very helpful tips @elfwing !!!! 🙂

OK. Let me tRy thIS AGaiN(I keep making same mistake and deleting my message, this is attempt number 3…4…?)

@ribbonash

Lol, that’s fine. I only started liking Percy Jackson around the third or fifth book. I think I really enjoyed it because it was me, a little sheltered homeschooler, reading a book I chose to for myself.

@kathleenramm

So I…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

That’s pretty rough. But a good idea for honest critique…

So, my friend read a short story of mine once. You must understand, this friend was very nice and polite. But after reading my story she kinda cringed, looked at me, and said she’d get the edit back to me later. Yea, so a couple weeks later she hands me my book and it’s…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

*reads*

*brain hurts*

*reads again*

Oooh, I like it. It makes me think and struggle to say what I think about my thoughts. Confusion is common in my mind.

I don’t have much critique on this subject. But, this makes me think you’d enjoy one of my favorite quotes tho.

“Oh, it’s a case of, they’ll think I’ll think that they’ll do…[Read more]

@ribbonash

did you say… Percy Jackson?

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS

I love Percy Jackson. So, you’ve read the first series, yes, but have you read HoO? Or KC? Or MC? And, dare I ask, have you read *shutters* Trials of Apollo?

Heroes of Olympus and PJO have to be my favorites out of the whole thing. Despite the flaws, and the infamous Gary Sue…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

that’s cool! I didn’t know that abt the mbti.

Percy Jackson is great. The first few books and most of the HoO books are the best, I think. Magnus Chase and Kane Chronicles are pretty good, but weren’t enough for me to finish them, ig XD. The writing, the plot holes, the timelines, yea, they could be better, I’ll admit. Trials of…[Read more]

@nanisnook Welcome back! Yeah KP can make me feel guilty too…but I recently started working on a short story so I feel a bit better about it now haha

Honestly, I might just go back (if you’re working in a Word/Google doc) and put some comments in the places where I want to add those ideas. But if they are huge things that affect everything in…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Hullo and welcome!

Lol, I’ve probably watched the Emperors New Groove like, 40 times so far in my life. It’s very good.

Yea, I’m and INTJ actually. Do you know what those letters stand for? I found a cool graph online that shows what it means. Basically you pick the letters based off of words that describe you. It looks kinda like…[Read more]

@maryg3

Ooh, this is exiting! I have the time and I’d love to read it! Here’s my email: AnatraBreathesBooks@gmail.com

@sparrowhawke Haha yeah I just really like history, I don’t actually know how I got interested in Japanese history–it’s just kinda been something I’ve always been enthusiastic about learning XD

Electric bass was super fun, I could mostly play rhythms and I was in a very small band for awhile, but I’ve never played electric bass for a crowd…[Read more]

@maryg3 Ooh that’s so exciting! I’d love to read it. My email is jodiwrites21@gmail.com 🙂

@sparrowhawke Hello! My name is Jodi. I write fantasy, historical fiction, and the occasional dystopian piece. I also like ancient stuff–I minored in history (mostly medieval England, American history, and the entire history of Japan haha) when I was in college.

I like music too. I play piano, sing, and used to play electric bass! My favorite…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke Hellooo! So, I think you should choose your tense based on how close/far you want the reader to feel to the main character, the MC’s feelings, and how immediate you want the events of the story to feel.

First person present makes the reader feel like they are right there in the story, with things happening to them just the same way…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Well, I’m glad to hear that you’re stuck with TAS because that is not a novel to ever consider giving up on! 😀

Ah, thank you! Yeah, The Keep Legends feel sorta ancient to me now, I may work on the novel again someday, but as you said, we can’t and really shouldn’t invest in novels that we the writers can’t get invested in.
That…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 @elfwing @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @gracie-j and to everyone who read the first installment:

I just wanted to thank every one of you again for all your feedback and comments, they genuinely are priceless to me and have been immensely helpful more than you’ll ever know. Every time I saw a response, my whole day was made…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

THANK YOU!!! Aw, girl, that makes my day!! I’m so relieved that the characters and setting are clear and everyone is likable, all this feedback is invaluable, thank youthankyouthankyou for everything you said!!! 😀 😀 😀