Ariel

Okay so same with the tragic lives, and this character went through a lot to get there, but probably my girl Catherine, because she’s a cyborg and can shoot guns out of her arm among some other stuff XD Annnd she’s super strong.

Just came up with this on a whim and thought I’d stick it here!

In the woods.

In the meadow

in the woods

listen softly

to the woods

there’s a widow

crying there

and there’s a son

lying there.

In the meadow

in the woods

Listen closely

to all who told

for silver and gold

sing a melody

in the meadow

in the woods.

Sleep now…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting I loove the short little stanzas you always add as your signature!! This one is soo pretty. Where did you find it?

@abigail-m Ooh that makes me so happy to hear!! Thanks!!

@devastate-lasting Yay!! Thank you <3

@abigail-m Thank you!!!! 🙂

@daisy-torres

I just finished reading the prologue. I actually don’t have any critiques for it; it was amazing:D

@libby

Those sound like great characters! 🙂

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Those are awesome characters, I especially like Faye:)

@Kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @nova21 @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @writerlexi1216 @scoutfinch180 @wyn-rose @gracie-j

Everyone has such awesome characters! 😀

@gracie-j Ok, thank you!!! 🙂 I already have some stuff in my mine, but it’s not full yet and I didn’t know what else to put in it. Oooh, cool!!!! The first thing I had put in my box was a necklace that I had made a while back inspired by my WIP. I also have a couple of rocks and a flower in my box. What are you putting in your box?

@gracie-j Hey, Gracie!!! I have a question on the character/book boxes that we were making. Does the box need to be completely filled or is it okay if it’s not filled to the top? Thanks! 🙂

@kathleenramm I think I would choose my MC, Rosalie. She’s a princess and a good leader. She cares about her people and her country and will do anything to defend them. Plus, Rosalie is a fairy and I would LOVE it so much to be a fairy for the day (not to mention a fairy princess😉).

@kathleenramm

Ooo, fun idea!!  Let’s see…  None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow.  I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude.  And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Congrats!!

 

Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh.  My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!!  I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver No problem! Haha yes, I saw them. I kind of got busy lol. I’ll get to them soon! Thanks for telling me!

@writerlexi1216

I love this sooo much!!!  Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉  To answer your questions,

1)  I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!

2)  Yes, I would!!!  I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?

3)  I think the pacing is great!!

Great job!!!!! 💛

@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]