Annika C.

@joelle-stone

Can you give me your current synopsis and a couple of quotes from your book you love?  I’ll mess around with the blurb if you want and you can choose which one you like.

hey guys!  I wrote this, but it’s still a 1st draft.  thought some of y’all might be interested. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2OsQCk-z8DY2dcyCmX3LUhgpV0eg8BxJMUSSeWIn1c/edit?usp=sharing

@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @lydia-s @nanisnook @writerlexi1216 @abigail-m

@sparksaraabbott11

it’s unedited btw, first draft haha

@sparksaraabbott11

are you home schooled?

No, but i was for a long time.  i’m a freshman at a classical christian school.

do you like doctor who?

never have seen it… is it good?

do u have a blog?

nope, but i want to make one later on.

how old are you?

fifteen.

your WIP sounds AWESOME! i’m glad u like mine. can i read some of yours?

aw, th…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms Interesting names!

@issawriter7 Thank you! I love yours as well!

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, I totally feel this!!  Everything people already said was great, but the thing I’d consider the most is to try writing something new.  That doesn’t mean you’re giving up on your book, you just need a break from your particular WIP.  And, hey, you might even get some ideas for your 2nd draft from another project… that’s ha…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, awesome question!  Well, my answer would be that I hate the passive heroes.  The ones that let everyone tell them what to do, or the ones that just “go with the flow.”  There’s a time and a place for that, but definitely not in the MC, imo! 😄

Oh, and melodramatic/overly-emotional heroes are the worst!!  Like when they just sit…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@gracie-j Ahem. Yes. I used to do the “He kissed her.” thing. Recently I’ve been trying to take some advice in, uh, describing it. Me, trying to describe what it feels like out of my own imagination:

I also tend to cut things short, so you’ll probably be ending up with like a paragraph long thing. But yea, I might give it another try next time I…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms #iwouldliketoseeyoutry

@nanisnook Yes, very red.

@gracie-j Mm…maybe, maybe. You’ve seen how I skimp on descriptions. I mean…I guess if I can imagine kiss scenes…that might…hmmm….

Ah, yes, GWTW was very very spicy. And also, mood about cheek-kissing.

1. I’m sure there are, haha. I wouldn’t call the first scene…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@gracie-j Ah, shoot, I left for too long and my post disappeared…never mind.

Pfft, thanks for tagging me, even with what you know about me. I like to feel included.

Ah, before I read your scene I don’t think I’ve read a kiss scene for maybe 6 years? Not sure. And usually I either avert my eyes during movies or watch with some sort of wide-eyed…[Read more]