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@freedomwriter76

Oh, those are delicious! (If that’s a proper adjective to use in any such like situation, it is here.)

Jennie’s is beautiful (sooo sweet.), and I think of the last three I especially liked Michael’s and Jayden’s. (Some of our family are Marines, so I might be a little biased. Just a little.) 😉

@elishavet-pidyon

Exactly! The Bible shows many disturbing things, and that is exactly what they should be. Disturbing, NOT intriguing.

Our writing should show the darkness as what it is, both to give boldness because we know our enemy, and a warning to not be like it.

It matters where your focus is. Remember Lot’s wife? Although her feet were…[Read more]

@wilder-w

First off, I totally agree with writing cleanly. While I have not had to combat that yet, my mother went through a lot because of some very unclean books. Praise the Lord, she was able to use her experience to teach us to be careful with what we put before our eyes.

Also, we need to be careful, vigilant. We do not fight against flesh…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I really don’t have experience with this, whether in life or in writing. However, I do have some friends that are part of a large family where each of them was adopted. As well as a family in our church that fostered to adopt. Adoption is beautiful, and I love it in a book.

I’ll tag @joy-caroline , because she has some knowledge…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

By the way, I don’t know if I’ve clarified this yet, but Viktor has nightmares sometimes about the night his parents died. (He doesn’t know that’s what it is, though he does suspect it’s more of a memory than imagination.) It’s also the time he got his hands burned. According to the people that…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Alyona

It was over. She had located Viktor as soon as the fists had stopped flying. He was sitting against the wall, his head leaned back, watching Franz with a much more peaceful expression.

Then he had come forward and now he was checking after Riker and the others.

Alyona followed Arabella…[Read more]

@ava-blue

I’m randomly jumping in, but I did read it so…

For one, that’s a looong paragraph.

For two, there’s a typo in “If I only I could get a backdrop behind der verflixte Elche.”

Anyway, it sounds interesting! Is there more to the story?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…

He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.

Never lost control.

Zlatan closed his eyes.

Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.

Blink. Was that h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.

He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.

“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”

The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Ah, yes. This is perfect! (In a horrible way.)

Viktor

The man was on the ground, the fight was over. Viktor’s shoulder ached from where he’d collided with Zlatan.

From Zlatan’s face, Viktor guessed the Voyager didn’t mind that Viktor had pushed him away from his purpose.

Or rather, back onto…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

For a moment silence reigned.

Mikkel blinked.

“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Wow. These characters… Wow.

*Pulls Zlatan into the group hug*

*Doesn’t think Nyx would want to be huged by a stranger*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

White hot fury.

Freezing passion.

Smell of blood.

The world went red.

.

.

He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.

“I’m sorry.”

He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.

Riker looker up his eyes wide.

“I’m sorry.”

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Ooooooooooooooo! Pizza!

Riker, November… Words fail.

Alyona

Something had changed. This was bad.

Alyona strained to see her brother’s face. When she did, the breath left her lungs.

Lit with a strange fury, his face shone white, but the anger met grief in his eyes. Dangerous grief.

He…[Read more]

@wilder-w
Let it shine
Let it shine
Let it shine!
Uh, =)

@godlyfantasy12

That’s fine!  (I kinda take long anyways, sooo.) November is wonderful!

@godlyfantasy12

It’s fine! I like long ones, although I usually can’t write them.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

All our dearest characters are our hurt ones!!!

Oh, if Alwin we’re here right now….

Viktor

The man… Hit… Riker.

Viktor’s mind froze on the image, unreal in the torch light. His ears filled with the sound of the blow.

And Alya’s scream.

Then two things fell into place.

This was a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

I KNOW!! He’s come so far…he has scars NO one knows about, besides the parents of the children those scars saved.

@freedomwriter76

Ok! Good to know. 😉

Poor Riker!!!

@koshka

I LOVE ZLATAN!!!