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@wyn-rose

Those are so beautiful, Wyn!!

@everyone

Y’all, you guys are awesome!!!!

Ok, I’m a bit late to the party, but here are a few lines that I like:

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Nic traces his finger over the back of my hand.  “Sometimes, it’s not about understanding each other,”  he whispers.  “Because some of us have more inside us than it’s safe to kn…[Read more]

1. Are my characters likable? I just wanted confirmation that Caira was, in fact, interesting.

Yeah, all of them are (so far). Yes, Caira is interesting! I enjoyed being in her head. 🙂

2. Is the story engaging? If you were in a bookstore, would you keep reading? Does it keep you hooked?

100%. I would definitely keep reading!!!!! YES, the s…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

I hope you can see my post. It does still exist, just not here. Let me know if you can’t see it and I will to try to repost it.

Oh, what the heck, my post disappeared again! -_- I was just trying to edit it!!!!!! You are allowed to do that, right?!

@e-k-seaver

Okay, before I get into your questions, I do want to add some other things first. I do agree with other comments that your MC is pretty passive. Every single action that has happened was directed toward Melia and Celeste only ever observed anything. To be honest, her POV is kinda of boring save for these moments into her backstory. At…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Yeah, I think I’m gonna go too. Probably because I…um…*cough, cough* got distracted on Canva and am now making a graphic for Genie and not actually writing. *sheepish grin* See ya later!! THANK YOU for writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33

@mkfairygirl

Okay, catch ya later, Kat. Nice writing with ya. 🙂

@devastate-lasting

Heheehehe….*evil laughter heard in the distance*

@mkfairygirl

*more evil laughter*

Okay, gonna be honest, I just said that to keep everyone on their toes. XD Whether she dies or not is something I’m keeping to myself. 😉

@joy-caroline @mkfairygirl

Yeah, it’s sad when the characters we love die. 😭 😭 *sobs for eternity* But sometimes it’s just gotta happen. like when Genie dies in Into the Lamp.

@joy-caroline

Hahaha, I feel ya, girl.

@joy-caroline

No worries, girl!!!!!! I’m doing okay. I’m editing Into the Lamp currently and have suddenly realized some of my “emotional scenes” were really cringey. But hopefully they’re a bit better now. XD

@devastate-lasting yep, but we love you anyways, fictional people

@devastate-lasting YESSS!!!!!!! SOOOOO true!!!! What would we do without our fictional characters? Probably have more sanity…just saying. XD

@devastate-lasting YESSS!!!!!!! You say it, girl!!!!! And to our fictional characters. ’cause I just kinda had to XD

@devastate-lasting LOL! SAME!!! XD

what’s up @devastate-lasting

@mkfairygirl

np

@joy-caroline

*waves back*

@mkfairygirl

Alrighty! I guess I’m ready to get a bit of writing done.

@mkfairygirl

I’ll join in about twenty to thirty minutes. I’ve got some American Government homework to do. Ugh.

@nanisnook

Hey Natalie!! (i love your name, btw)  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!!!!!!!! 🎉  So glad you’re here!!!

Here are a couple of things about me:

1)  I have two WIPs, both containing sisters with a lot of problems 😊:  #1 is a futuristic/speculative, #2 is a fantasy.

2)  I love smoothies!!

3)  Basketball is the best sport, imo &#x1f6…[Read more]