-
ella replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
This guy sounds fascinating! His backstory is awesome, and he sounds like a genuine character. For likeability, you could:
1)Â Give the MC and Ridley something in common (a hobby, a genre of music, a favorite food, etc)
2) like @elfwing said, moments of vulnerability. That would make the reader open up to him really fast…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic Animated Movie in the forum Film 3 years, 3 months ago
If you have the resources, go for it! No regrets! 😉 If it totally flunks, don’t sweat it. If it turns out to be the best choice you could have made, yay you! <33 (I think a yt channel would work well for that)
-
ella replied to the topic What's your character's Lie? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
Awesome topic, I LOVE this kinda stuff!
Hmmm…. *ponders over which best
most devastatingcharacter lie to use*Enter Dylan. He believes he can’t be loved. He wasn’t loved or appreciated by his father as a boy, and then he witnessed his mother’s death, which scarred him. He put all his worth into MMA fighting but didn’t thi…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic No Need To Open This Topic in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
I’ll check it out!
-
ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
Ahhh! I’m at chapter seventeen and I just can’t stop! This book is well-written, intriguing, and TOTALLY PUBLISHABLE!  Make it happen, Emily. This needs to be published.
I just can’t stop thinking about how amazing this is! I don’t know how many times I’ve laughed out loud… (and I seriously almost cried once!) And the chara…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
Got it!  So excited, I’ll check it out later today.
-
ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
Bahahaha! I know, me toooooo! My sister was really annoyed about how much I was gushing about Dylan… he’s just so amazing! If I could bring any of my charries to life, it’d be him (and then I’d marry him!) XD XD XD
-
ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
Thank ya kindly! <3 Ooo, cool! I’d say Corvina might be a conflicted character, and Arabella might be a really sweet, friendly personality. Am I right? XD
Girl, I’d totally read this! Totally keep writing… GO GO GO! 😉
Thanks! I know, it’s kinda weird to see the dialogue out of context. But th…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
Congrats Emily!! I’ll do it! Dystopian is my all time favorite genre. I’m so excited to read this!
My email is ellafinkbeiner11@gmail.com
Thanks for the opportunity!
-
ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
-
ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
Hahaha! I already love Felicity! 😉
He totally sounds like you described him. If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉
Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please? Just a day? XD
Hahaha! Poor Horace. *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂
-
ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey Kayleigh!! Of course! That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂
Hey Elfwing! Thanks!! Oh I totally get that!! That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!
Hey Daisy! Aw, thanks!! That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]
-
ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
The title says it all, folks. I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.
So I’ll share mine first!
MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed. A little self-protective. Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.
1) “Better.” (*rolls eyes…
-
ella replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
This is ALL too relatable, Lexi! The way I usually (try) to overcome writer’s block/burnout is picking up a different project. I have *counts Scrivener docs* 25 WIPs from the last 2 yrs. Not that they’re perfect. (Or finished.)
This way really helps me to take a step back and pick a project that I’ve been developing pre…[Read more]
-
ella and Mary G are now friends 3 years, 3 months ago
-
ella started the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey guys! Before I tell you my problemo, I’ll fill you in on the story first. Here’s They Came At Night’s synopsis:
24 miles off the Island of Camino, a commercial airline goes down in the Pacific. Only one passenger survives.
Dylan, an orphan-turned-foster child, was living with his uncle when he got the chance of a lifetime: travel to the i… -
ella replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey Mary! (Btw, before I forget, it looks like your website link on your forum signature is cut off… maybe shorten it? I think it’s limited to 80 or so characters…? Just letting you know, I do that all the time!)
Thanks! I’m trying to decide on a title right now. Do you like Camino or They Came at Night better? I kinda like…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
Great topic, I love it! 🤣
Well, my weirdest story was probably my first one. *epic music plays in the background* The Teres of the Man. Â
Complete with illustrations!! Oh yeah! XD It was about a horse named Wanna (not Wanda, Wanna), an anteater named Carrie, and a frog named Joe. And the villain was (to quote straight from t…[Read more]
-
ella replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey Ben! I’m Ella. Welcome, welcome! Ooo, cool! You want to write more action in books? Cool. I like to write YA dystopian and thriller/suspense mainly. My WIP synopsis is:
24 miles off the Island of Camino, a commercial airline goes down in the Pacific. Only one passenger survives.
Dylan, an orphan-turned-foster child, was li… -
ella replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey Mary! I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!! I’ve been homeschooled for most of my life, but this next year will be my second year at a classical Christian school. My WIP synopsis is:
24 miles off the Island of Camino, a commercial airline goes down in the Pacific. Only one passenger survives.
Dylan, an orphan-turned-foster child, was li…
- Load More