AKBaer

@akbaer

Woohoo! I’m actually kinda excited myself! Though not for the geometry. 😛

@daisy-torres i love it!  wanna read it now…

@kathleenramm

yes, poor Colin. It also shows how critically important parents are; if you don’t teach your child to be confident and  a little independent, they literally cannot do things for themselves. And yes, he’s not a character I want to relate to but I can and it is encouraging to see his transformation!

as for my writing style… it was…[Read more]

@daisy-torres ok all good totally understand!!! But yeah if you want to in the future just lemme know 🙂
@nova21 ok no problem and thank you for the suggestions!! 🙂
@godlyfantasy12 fantastic!! just email roseoakauthor at gmail dot com when you’re ready and we’ll go from there! 😀

@kathleenramm

never have, probably never will. not because i don’t like it, i just can’t XD  i wish i had some tips, but all i can give are just the things Gracie already said. XD

@elfwing

i’m so sorry, but i’m really busy with my job.  I wish I could, and your story sounds fun! i love fantasy.  wish you the best of luck.  you might be able to find more beta readers on Story Embers, or you can search for the “ultimate beta reader list” on Recent Topics.  I can’t remember the tags off hand.  good luck! <33

@godlyfantasy12 haha thanks! i wanted to do it but i felt awkward only posting my own lines XD

@issawriter17 @gracie-j @anyone-else

“Thorne, we came to talk.” Lyn called out, standing on her tiptoes, as if that would help her voice carry. A muffled reply proceeded from the back. She groaned, walking to the entrance of the other room and mot…

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@akbaer

hahaha whales can be pretty intimidating.

I love board games!  My little bro and me have a Memory rivalry (which isn’t rlly a board game).

ooo Gollum impersonation sounds like my sister!🤣🤣 that’s her favorite pastime.

archery sounds awesome!  I bet you’ll be amazing!  My BFF is super good at archery PLUS she is basically Jennifer…[Read more]

@joy-Caroline glad to help!! 🙂 these are honestly some of my favourite character tips lol  I love these kind of characters *inwardly cries at the pain I cause them *

@kathleenramm Yes Tolkien was an amazing author! My inspiration for writing style is partly from him but less ‘fancy wording’ if you get what I mean XD simpler English.

Aww yes Colin is such a good character for a positive character arc. His character lie is big, isn’t it? I suppose he’s very relatable; he may be a brat to begin with and a…[Read more]

@joy-caroline this is right up my alley, girl!  I LOVE parallel characters with different arcs!!!!!!! ❤  Keziah sounds AH-MAZE-ING!  I just *internally squeals* love her already.

Like @godlyfantasy12 said, I mentioned some things corresponding to this on her “Making my antagonist likeable/believable” topic.  To echo that, I’ll just cut and pas…[Read more]

@joy-caroline well I’d suggest giving moments showing her praying and asking God to help her with forgiveness, and showing her conflict with her anger and her want to obey God’s will of forgiveness. Show her earnest desire to follow God’s word I suppose; show the moments of love she gives others when she has the chance, but then her unsurity of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 ok sounds like a good plan! 🙂

btw it is fantasy and is not an allegory any more than Lord of the Rings is. I instead strongly incorporate lessons like loyalty, honesty, and forgiveness in my stories. It doesn’t have ‘magic’ as in wizards, and witches and such things if that gives you a better idea. Some of the evil people…[Read more]

@keilah-h ok!! *crack knuckles and sweats nervously XD

first beta reader down XD roseoakauthor at gmail dot com 🙂

@ariel-f it’s 61684