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Catwing posted an update 6 years, 5 months ago
Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I think I have editing figured out now. Cutting down the POVs to just Alex, Chase, and Cele. Finally letting go of the VR beginning that I was stubbornly clinging to. If you realised something about the whole VR please tell me cuz in my mind it only foreshadows book two and I don’t want to…[Read more]
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Sink started the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Hello there Kapeefers! I’ve got an… issue with my main character.
He’s naive. And incredibly stubborn, very hardheaded, and just… kind of boring. I don’t even know why. He’s got pretty fleshed out motivations, hopes/dreams/wants/needs etc, but I just can’t get interested in him to actually sit down and write. I’ve been plotting and writing…[Read more]
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Catwing posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @jess-penrose @daughteroftheking
I’ve been thinking about changing the VR scene in the first two chapters. Perhaps to just a ‘playdate’ with them sword fighting (because I want to have sword knowledge before they go on their quest), obstacle course, or something like that.
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I think that would be good. As long as it is clear what is going on, and maybe provides some insight into the characters personalities during the scenes, which would make it doubly useful.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part the Last: Joy, Mirth, and Acclamation
“Three…”
It was noon. The public Easter worship service at the castle Regnis had recently come to a close. Creamy clouds slid across the sky, and The Raspberry Sun shone upon the Kingdom of Pen, bringing refreshing warmth.
“…Two…”
Jenna was lounging in a lawn chair (w…[Read more]
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Joy posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago
GREETINGS KAPEEFERS!!!
I thought I’d let you know that I’m going to be on a hiatus from KP until the end of the school year. This place is so amazing, but it’s keeping me from my work. It isn’t healthy for me. I am going to start the hiatus sometime next week after I post the last part of the KPA (probably Easter Sunday). After that I won’t be…[Read more]
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Okay, Dekreel
😀 Have a good hiatus, and God bless your writing, too. And good luck with the rest of the school year
Stan and I will eagerly await the return of the amazing wolf named Dekreel.
Nope.
Nope, you aren’t a wolf.
You’re NOTI’m glad you aren’t leaving without finishing the KPA, though! The wait would make Stan’s scales fall off
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Thanks a lot!
*cringes* *calms down* THANK you! See @rochellaine? Sam believes I’m not a wolf! 😉-
I would beg to call to your notice that @sam-kowal did accidentally slip and call you a wolf, before vehemently protesting otherwise, therefore proving that he thinks of you as a wolf, but usually refrains from saying so in order as to be polite and not injure your poor feelings. In that way he is similar to me.
😉 😀-
*shakes head*
You and your law school… 😉-
Wait…do other people not talk like that? 😀 Haha. I should be “sending you away with a smile” instead of persecuting you, shouldn’t I? 😉
But to change the subject just slightly, I was planning to tell you this and it seems like a good time now…I know it’s all teasing and fun but if you ever feel that I’m too harsh or annoying or unkind,…[Read more]
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@rochellaine Oh, you’re making me smile. Believe me. 😉
Thanks. I don’t think you’re being harsh or unkind at all! In fact, I think you’re putting your law school stuff to good use. Especially with someone as impulsive, slightly snarky, and — dare I say it — implausible as me.
It’s a little… frustrating trying to argue my cases around you.…[Read more]
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Fare thee well! *waves handkerchief sadly* I’m going to miss you dearly. See you at the end of the school year! *sets sights on the promise of summer* *trudges off*
P.S. To answer your question, the episodes I watched of the Fifth Doctor were about Daleks.
Until next time! *salutes* *disappears in a puff of smoke*-
@dekreel What is hiatus? Whatever it is, I am sure sorry you won’t be around for so long. But I am glad you are doing what you need to do and just telling us about it. May God bless you writing, dear friend-who-is-not-a-wolf! Be sure to tell us when your back!
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@dekreel I’m sad to hear that, but I understand completely. Actually, I will most likely be dropping off the Kingdom during the week, until weekends, because of schoolwork. Also, my school is starting state testing in a week. 😐
I think that they went “Anonymous.” I don’t really know, though.
“*coughwarrencough*” o.o *blinks* I will, don’t…[Read more]-
@warrenluther04 I feel like I need to do that sometimes, too. But we’ll see how this goes…
An MC, eh? Sweeeeet… *grins*
I don’t have a blog! I said I’d be commenting on OTHER people’s blogs… Sorry about the confusion. Do YOU have a blog? 😀
Thanks, so much. And you’re welcome. I couldn’t leave you guys living in such suspense now, could I? 😉
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@ariel-ashira “Hiatus” means I’m taking a break from KP.
Thank you! And don’t worry, I will totally tell you when I’m back. XD
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“Promise of summer” has a nice ring to it. 😉
I’ll miss you, too!! *tight hug*
Ahh, yes. I haven’t seen that one in awhile…
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@dekreel I hope you will come back feeling refreshed and accomplish what you were hoping to. 🙂 We will miss you like crazy, but I totally understand your reasons. *hugs* 😉
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@jenwriter17 Thank you! *nods* I hope so, too. I will miss y’all like crazy, too!! *returns hug*
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Ah, I used to hang out on KP too much too. You’ll find a better balance in time. Till then, have a great break and I’m glad you’re coming back!
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@daeus Yes, I think this hiatus would balance my time perfectly. XD
Thank you, Daeus! And yes, count on it. 😉
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@dekreel I understand. *hands you a few feathers for your trip*
I will miss you too. At we can read the end of your story, unlike the person who is taking why too long on there’s. *cough*
Wait just a minute!
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What?!
So we were racing?! *stares at you* *blinks* Why of the all things that I should notice.
Oh. Oh. Oh. You have started something…[Read more]-
@catwing Thanks for the feathers XD
Umm… Well, I guess it wasn’t officially a race. I mentioned something about racing once but I don’t think you replied. We’re both pretty close together rank-wise, so I thought we’d race and see who becomes the Chosen One next. But now since I’m going away… *sighs* The finish line is yours.
(Maybe. Unless…[Read more]
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@dekreel You are welcome.
I did reply to that comment saying, “no thanks.” Oh well.
*nods* yes the finish line… *grin*
(No way. *shakes head* Nope. 😉 )
I don’t think I’ve actually killed off a MC. I did have a prologue where I killed off the MC’s parents. But then I felt bad and made them an epic back story. 🙂
My revenge is the fake die…[Read more]-
I just need 75. (Nice, number. I like fives. 🙂 )
You need 43.
(Yes, I counted those because of The GIF Hiders. :3 )
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@catwing Goodness, I didn’t know! Sorryyy… Well, it was a private race, at least.
Ohh! I hope you realize that you just did a spoiler alert. XD Unless you’ll drop the idea. (I actually think the fake death is a pretty cool idea. And it’ll go along with my leaving.)
Little? Huh, yeah. Look at how tall I am. JK 😉
Looking forward to it!!
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@dekreel It’s okay.
*cackles* I never said Catwing Christmas. *thunder booms* I can happen at any given time when you least expect it.
Yeah, yeah. You’re bigger than me. *pouts* (but probably not in real life 😛 )
And then she looked forward to her demise…
Thank you. But it’s 2’s, 5’s, and 10’s for me. 🙂
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I have just lost a race I didn’t even think was happening… Wow, that’s a new one. 😛
You better prepare yourself when you come back.
I think we may be becoming the next Ethryndal and Snapper. XP
Oh, my.
But if so, which of us is Snapper and which is Ethryndal?
XD
*grins and vanishes*
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@dekreel Not sure if you’re on hiatus yet or not, but I did find out what happened to Shannon and Emily. Shannon said I could tell anyone who asked- apparently, they aren’t going to be coming back 🙁 That’s why their accounts are dark now
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Ahhh I’m late…. >.< See you when you get back, @dekreel!!! I'll be praying for you, my friend. 🙂 Here are some cookies for the road. *sends cookies*
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Another favorite part. With good reason. 😉
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eleven: Daybreak, Mayhem, and Rocks
“This wasn’t supposed to be my problem.”
“Aww, cheer up, Xonos! It’s an experience!”
“Yeah, it’s—AUGH! Oomph! ARIELLA!!”
“That wasn’t me, it was Iliara!”
“Sorryy, Aisyyy…”
Jenna cocked her head and smirked at N.C.’s…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @alia @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong @notawriter @jenwriter17 @warrenluther04 @dekreel @skredder
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @alia @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong @notawriter @jenwriter17 @warrenluther04
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Ten: Encouragement. In Many Ways.
And so, Jenna, Dekreel, Catwing, Skredder, Valentine, Rochellaine, Jane Maree and the troll-thing hid GIFs for the grand Easter-GIF hunt together. In the meantime, they talked laughed, bickered, argued, joked, and ate.
It didn’t take long at all for Jenna to warm up to her n…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@catwing @rochellaine @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @aislinn-mollisong @ariella-newheart @dragon-snapper @kaya-young @anyone…
I’m writing!
*resumes attempt to get my characters to do something…*
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Another one of my favorite parts. For good reason. Mwehehehhh…
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Nine: Disbelief
“Halt!!” barked another new voice. “Halt in the name of the law!”
Jenna pulled her palms from her eyes, and peeked at the troll, who, much to her relief, hadn’t squashed Valentine. His foot was in mid air, and Valentine…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic You Know You're a Kapeefer When… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
I can’t believe I haven’t found this before…
…during the reign of King West and Queen Alia.”
I’m in a story???
@dekreel, don’t go giving away my secret side job…
You know you’re a Kapeefer when you discover that one of your shirts’ tags says “Alia,” and you wonder if @alia designs clothing
you know you’re a KeePer when…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eight: Up a Tree
Having just hidden a Star Trek GIF, Skredder suddenly lifted her head. “Earthquake,” she simply said.
Everyone looked at her. “What?” said Valentine.
“Earthquake! An earthquake’s coming!” Skredder repeated.
“She’s right! I feel it, too!” called Catwing from a tree branch.
“But earth…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong, since I’m only three chapters into his book, i think its safe to say that what I’m about to tell you is 80% going to change later.
Jycin is a weaver in his village until he is chosen to become a priest, the most hated and feared group in the land. he is given three days to say goodbye to his two year old daughter and get…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Girl Writing from a Guy's POV in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong One other observation of mine. I can’t confirm this, but I believe men aren’t any less emotional than women. They just don’t (as a generalization) do very much about it, whereas women tend to be emotionally proactive.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
I’ll tag other people, too…
@kaya-young @jenwriter17 @seekjustice @catwing @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @anyone
I’m writing!
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Story Tagging in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong Oh wow. Giving Stan the reigns to a dragon story is going to end up dangerous. He’s wanted to be a full-fledged dragon his whole life.
Story 1
Victor had to admit, being a dragon was cool. He could tell as soon Graenw morphed him into the beast how much power was bound inside his scaled limbs, begging to be used. How much…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Girl Writing from a Guy's POV in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong I like to say that guys are just like girls, only they’re not. The point is that they’re both human and share the exact same humanity. Gender only changes one’s outlook on life and certain behaviors.
I think girls are generally able to write guys pretty well and vice versa. The one issue that’s coming to mind which I run into…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Girl Writing from a Guy's POV in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong I like to say that guys are just like girls, only they’re not. The point is that they’re both human and share the exact same humanity. Gender only changes one’s outlook on life and certain behaviors.
I think girls are generally able to write guys pretty well and vice versa. The one issue that’s coming to mind which I run into…[Read more]
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I’m glad to help! So, due to some problems on my end of the line, I can no longer edit the Google Doc. Well, I can sometimes, but the weird thing is, some days my computer can connect, some days it just won’t. I can still read it, and offer some general critiques, but I can’t comment. Is that ok?
For general stuff it might be easier to post it on the thread I created (I shall dig that up), but I replied to some of your comments so for that and pointing out exactly where things are you could comment on the doc.
I have it anyone with a link can comment, if you can’t comment you can request access. If you can’t do that I can change the link…[Read more]
@daughteroftheking you can contact me through my blog and I can give you access.
Send me a imaginary pigeon ;3
Sorry I’m late! (again!) I still have access, the problem is just my own computer being inconsistent. I can still comment most of the time, but I wanted to warn you that Google Docs and I are not the best of friends right now. 😛 I’m going to put beta reading as part of my school schedule (yay for homeschooling), so hopefully I can be more…[Read more]
I see. If it keeps happening you can email me and I’ll add you directly.
Yay homeschooling!
It’s been a month so I started my next draft. But it’s coming very slowly… I may editing it on the draft you have access to. Chapter one nearly done. So you can try and get me to work faster. 😉
Thanks! It tis a grand song.