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Catwing posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago
Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I think I have editing figured out now. Cutting down the POVs to just Alex, Chase, and Cele. Finally letting go of the VR beginning that I was stubbornly clinging to. If you realised something about the whole VR please tell me cuz in my mind it only foreshadows book two and I don’t want to have a blank in this book as I redo it.
I’m trying to integrate the parents/guardians of the MCs so if you have advice that could be helpful.@jess-penrose did you have any advice on character arcs? Because you mentioned I didn’t have a clear/obvious character arc.
Thank y’all for all of the comments. They have helped me improve my writing a good lot. It has been a while so if you don’t remember that’s fine. ;3
@daughteroftheking @aislinn-mollisong
I’m glad to help! So, due to some problems on my end of the line, I can no longer edit the Google Doc. Well, I can sometimes, but the weird thing is, some days my computer can connect, some days it just won’t. I can still read it, and offer some general critiques, but I can’t comment. Is that ok?
For general stuff it might be easier to post it on the thread I created (I shall dig that up), but I replied to some of your comments so for that and pointing out exactly where things are you could comment on the doc.
I have it anyone with a link can comment, if you can’t comment you can request access. If you can’t do that I can change the link settings and see if you can do it then. Thank you.
@daughteroftheking you can contact me through my blog and I can give you access.
Send me a imaginary pigeon ;3
Sorry I’m late! (again!) I still have access, the problem is just my own computer being inconsistent. I can still comment most of the time, but I wanted to warn you that Google Docs and I are not the best of friends right now. 😛 I’m going to put beta reading as part of my school schedule (yay for homeschooling), so hopefully I can be more consistent. Sorry I wasn’t very active over the summer. 🙁 There was… stuff… Anyway, nice blog! I really love the song I Just Need U too!
I see. If it keeps happening you can email me and I’ll add you directly.
Yay homeschooling!
It’s been a month so I started my next draft. But it’s coming very slowly… I may editing it on the draft you have access to. Chapter one nearly done. So you can try and get me to work faster. 😉
Thanks! It tis a grand song.