@abigail-m
Active 5 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
- Total Posts: 1242
-
KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
(TW- mentions of blood, wounds, murder of a child)
Chapter 15
Roger
Pressing cloths against the wound tightly, I checked her pulse. Hands shaking, I could still feel it faintly. It’s okay. She just went unconscious. She’ll be okay. Right?
My heart slamming in my chest, my breath tight against my ribs disagreed. Pictures flashed in my mind, pic…[Read more]
-
KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
(TW- Pain? suffering? a bad injury)
Chapter 14
X392
Pain.
Pain surrounded me.
Pain shooting from my shoulder, burning, stinging like it was ripping me apart. Black dots clouded my vision, panic shaking my body, not understanding what had and was happening.
All I could feel was pain. Pain, and hot blood on my back. The hard floor against…[Read more]
-
KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
sorryyy I’ve been nonexistant. I’m 7 chapters away from being done with this so i’ve been very busy. (this is way behind how much there actually is but now that i’m less busy for the summer i’ll try to update more.)
(No warnings)
Chapter 13
Nathaniel
“It’s okay Nate…It’s just the woods.” I said quietly to myself. “Nothin…[Read more]
-
Lydia S. replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Oooo, how fancy! XD I hope you enjoy it!
I work at an orchard! It’s really nice because it’s time outside, not using the creative side of my brain. With how much effort Author takes, it’s a huge blessing to be able to turn my brain on autopilot for a while.😂
-
Annabelle replied to the topic Hey, it's been a while. ~ Chat Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Haha, I know right?! Good to see you, too!
I guess I just like the flexibility of being able to get my school done as fast or slow as I want in a day, without being confined to a specific schedule. How about you?
Cool!
-
Lydia S. replied to the topic ✨ New WIP Ideas Forum ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Yes, I agree; Biblical fiction is a weighty challenge to take on. The amount of research and study that has to go into it is one of the reasons I’m holding off on trying it. I want to make sure I have the basic writing skills down before I try to write something that hard. 😉 Hence, Biblical retellings! Since it’s a retelling, I hav…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Yay! I always love the scene clips from your books!
As for how to move on, it seems like the scene is ready to move into action/ active discription (I have no idea what the real term for that is). Having something happen such as someone/something bump into her could be a good transition, or saying something like “She wove…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@hybridlore yea basically! I really like the idea about seeing someone from her nightmares too…
@smiley yea understandable.
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
So Ara suffers from major anxiety, mostly in this first book of the series.
When she was little something occurred that basically marked her (literally and figuratively) and she hasn’t been able to recover since.
ShE’s A’Grend’s princess, but they don’t really treat her with the respect she quite deserves, not that they’re o…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey yall!! I could use a bit of help…
So I really need to do some writing as I’ve fallen behind recently, but thing is…I get stuck super easily. I just don’t know what to write…
Sometimes I don’t really know how to continue scenes or how to start them, ya know?? I guess everyone has that but I didn’t know if maybe yall would have some…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic The Weekly Artist's Group in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
Actually, I don’t think I’ll have time tomorrow. Instead I’ll probably post it next week, so there’s still a challenge slot open if anyone wants it.
-
Koshka replied to the topic The Weekly Artist's Group in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
Ooo, I’m the Director…Bwahahaha…
Sounds good to me.
I may submit a challenge tomorrow, if y’all are fine with that. It would probably be for two weeks as I won’t be able to be steady on here untill sometime June.
-
Kathleen replied to the topic Help ?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
Great! Best of luck with the project!
-
GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Destined Fanfic: Pyromania AU! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Alright, first, TAGS!
@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @acancello @dekreel @euodia-vision @smiley @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @lydia-s @felicity @joy-calle @awsumfaith @starshiness @e-m-trepke @hybridlore @whalekeeper @esther-c @freedomwriter76 (Ik ur on break but if u…[Read more]
-
Kathleen replied to the topic Help ?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
I find doing a character brain dump helps a lot with fleshing out who this character is within my mind while also helping me get ideas going. So like taking a few pieces of paper, and without restriction or too much thought, freely writing down anything and everything that comes into my head about this character.
Appearance,…[Read more]
-
Annabelle and
Kylie are now friends 3 years, 3 months ago -
Koshka replied to the topic The Weekly Artist's Group in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
*Totally have never done that before*
Welcome! Count yourself counted.
XD
You’d be welcome!
-
Koshka replied to the topic The Weekly Artist's Group in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
Hear ye, hear ye! This is the not so official Challenge Guide Sheet!
Anyone may give a challenge, but only one or two Challenges should be going at any given time to avoid confusion.
Challenges for the week meet to be posted between Sunday morning and Monday night.
Due dates can be up to a maximum of two weeks and a minimum of one week.
Label…[Read more]
-
Annabelle replied to the topic Hey, it's been a while. ~ Chat Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks! Unfortunately, I’m having some serious problems with my website today, so I’m not sure you’ll be able to view any of the pages. 😟 I’m hoping it will be up and running soon.
Same! I normally start making an outline before I write, but it ends up changing so much when I write the first draft. XD
-
Annabelle replied to the topic Hey, it's been a while. ~ Chat Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
That sounds so cool! I love that concept! I will try to find time to read it soon, because it sounds really cool! 🙂
I have two main WIPs right now. The first is called The Keeper of the Phantom Reef, and it’s the second book in my Daughters of the Sea series. I published the first book, Identity, in March. It’s about an or…[Read more]
- Load More
