AveryTheExplodey

@rae

I officially label myself an idiot who can’t explain anything right!

 

Ugh! I’ll reply once I cool off…

Don’t label yourself an idiot:(

I look forward to your reply!

@a-r-kuhn

Hmm, I’ve never really thought of it in these terms… Let’s put it this way: There’s rules, but I might be the only one who knows them right now. Really depends on the world. I have one world with a complicated system of magic, and a different world where there’s not really any true magic, just people with native abilities. In the magic…

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@jonas

I don’t really have answers to any of those questions XD. I liked the idea of having a weird sort of fire like that, but yeah, it’s not very interesting yet. The magic system as a whole is not to far developed, so maybe when I have more details I can differentiate the two flames. Otherwise, I probably will get rid of it.

That’s fair! I thi…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

@scoutfinch180

@scoutfinch18o

Heyyy, I don’t think we’ve really met! I’m Sara (which you probably already knew haha!)

I have been stalking the topic where you’ve been critiquing RAE’s WIP…and I really like your critiquing style!

I was wondering…if you could maybe….critique mine too….?

I understand if you don’t have the time to help two people…I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr @vinagirl @hybridlore

Introducing….Marcurious!!!

Here’s the newest chapter I wrote in my WIP:

Marcurious deftly snatched a ripe apple from the market stall, and sauntered away, holding his head high as if without a care in the world.

He pasted a look of innocence on his face.

I didn’t steal this apple. Nope. I p…

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@esther-c

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

@anyone-who-needs-a-good-cry

I just wrote something very depressing and sad….so if anyone wants to read it…well…

A dull throbbing sensation at the back of her neck.

Anger burning hot in her veins.

Screams echoing around her, both her own, and the screams of innocent souls.

The smell of alcohol, of chloroform, of pain, of fear.

The smell…

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@rae

Proper amount of sleep? My amount of sleep is apparently four to six hours… Whatever.

🙃

I’m not sure exactly what you’re saying but what I was trying to say is, if the Universe knew no god who had all the Omni’s, then we… Idk how to say this… Would know no greater thing, so that would be the ultimate god. If that makes sense.

I’m quite fine…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith

A little late, but I resolved to be more focused in general. Particularly with my relationship with the Lord. I have a relationship, and it’s constantly growing, but I want it in mind in every moment.

@a-r-kuhn

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom. I like math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and currently am working on a universe with my sister we call the Septrum.

Questions:

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the reader to f…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, so cinderblazing sounds interesting. What I want to know is what makes the voidflame different? Is it inherently evil, or is it simply the anti particle of cinderflame, and if so, in what ways does it have opposite behaviors?

I’m really intrigued by Shadowmancy. The way you describe the shadow realm makes me think of it as essentially…[Read more]

@acancello

How do you not eat sugar?!?! I would die haha! It’s not that I’m one of those people who love food too much (if you know what I mean XD) but I love being able to eat whatever I want and enjoying sweets from time to time.

I think it would be really cool if we could all coordinate a time to meet up somewhere (when we all can drive and…[Read more]

@acancello

Lol! Between me and my grandma we have enough food to last us all week XD

I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

WHYYYYYYYYY? THIS IS SO SAD!

@freedomwriter76

Doesn’t he die without being redeemed?

Idk, that’s just what I heard I think…

@esther-c

Omc, that is amazing!!! Thank you so much (: