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@vinagirl

Totally fine!

Cool! What’s the significance about it being two stones? Are they both needed? Can they be fused into a mineral or alloy to keep it to one object?

@vinagirl

Hello! It’s nice to meet you! That’s so cool! The Septrum is a cool name!

Thanks!

it’s awesome that you love math! (Wish I could say the same thing lol 😅)

It’s not everyone’s thing, that’s totally fine, lol!

I depends on what book I’m working on for the soft and hard thing. Some I like to be very flexible with and some have to have so…

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@vinagirl

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.

There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…

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@keilah-h

I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

N’nesha

Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.

Neshe: We need to get out of here.

Nele: Where even is “here”?

I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.

Neshe: This could be a good…[Read more]

@freedomwriter67

Here’s the last post, and I made sure there wasn’t any after that, it was around page 417:

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅

N’nesha

“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned……

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@freedomwriter76

and would y’all like to just get rid of our group with Uvah, N’Nesha, & Bucky, or continue it? (again, idk where we left off last 😆)

It’s been your turn actually. I can repost the last one if you want, just give me a moment to dig.

@princessachronical22 @lightoverdarkness6

Liren

She vanished… The same darkness that the woman commanded earlier suddenly enveloped her, and she was gone. Namal and her companion both jumped into defensive stances, eyes darting towards all the dark corners of the hallway. I looked around helplessly with my broken arm. Kirrtes reflected my…[Read more]

So I finished Elantris. It was really good, but there’s so many things in the Cosmere that is left unsaid. Apparently there is going to be a book two and three eventually though.

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Hmmm, I don’t know.

Thinking about compounding each of them, it would have very unique effects. Electrum would be funny. If you compounded that, and get a massive amount of determination, you might just start thinking yourself a god, without that really adding to your physical power in any way. Pewter alo and Gold feu would be a good combo,…[Read more]

@jonas

Sure, that works great, as long as you can type that easily.

@savannah_grace2009

Possibly, but this still feels kind of nebulas to me, even if it has a impact on him personally.

@jonas

I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.

So I simply call this a French j. It’s usually notated with a j in French, or ge in…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think that would work yes. If he believed that they simply threw him away, then that would be something that would weigh on him heavily. However if this is to slide into the exposition you gave, that would mean he associates the Pythonos with his parents choice, which would suggest that it wasn’t their fault. This is the…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, and names don’t have to be from the same language. A name that is noticeably foreign will be useful to say that the character is from a different context. If the character is from the same ethnic context, but has a foreign name, suggests a history with their parents, whatever that may be.

@esther-c

This is really up to you. I like the idea of the giving himself up thing instead of just being in the way though. It would cause a lot of emotional drive for Dabir later on. Not only because Amir saved him, but because he willfully took it upon himself.

@rae

This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!

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ChatGPT doesn’t work with making conlangs at all, I’ve made many heart felt attempts on helping it along.