Tristan S.

@daisy-torres

I just watched your friend’s song!! I loved it!😍 she has a beautiful voice! The lyrics really rang true for today’s society! 👍✨💎

@jodi-maile

Ah, the all too familiar dissatisfaction. This is pain in many forms. This is the point where I would’ve given up a couple years ago XD

But since then I have been taught perseverance! So when I’ve found my idea/theme shifts and am unsatisfied with it, I usually have to go back and read it and really just delete a lot. It hurts so…[Read more]

@calidris

Ah, yes, the methods of the Shrike… They’re a bit startling coming from a creature that appears so harmless. Did you choose that pseudonym for your villain based off of our villains personality/characteristics?

Aww, thx! Yeah, that is sad. Dragons are so cool!

Well, it’s a bit like medieval fantasy in regards to the weapons and armor…[Read more]

@jodie-maile oof I almost never end up keeping my original ideas in a story, everything changes constantly until I write one I like, but everything plays like a movie scene in my head, so if I don’t like the scene, ‘cut!’ Lol

If I have to stick to something,  then once I realize I don’t like it, I leave it alone for a bit, an hour, a day even,…[Read more]

@morgan aw thanks 🙂

It took the form of a small cute kitten. Mirabelle, of course, awwed and ran over, picking it up before I could stop her.

@kathleenramm well most of my characters are based off real people that I either know really well or have observed, and I recognize people by their voices and I guess I note how they talk. I’m weird hahaha

Also, after that, I write how I think, so it seems to work well.

Idk if that made sense haha, but that’s the best I can explain…[Read more]

The figure–me–shrugged.
It’s outline seemed to flicker in the light of the kitchen. Then it changed shape.

Mirabelle crossed her arms “Wait, let me get this straight; your double ganger was blackmailing you and you were appeasing him with Chipotle?”

Milo’s double ganger’s smile widened “Yo, your sister is smart lol.”

“She’s ten, of course she’s smart; have you never met a ten year old before?”

“Did you really think that you could keep this from Mirabelle forever? When we met that night-”

“WHY ARE YOU HERE You were never suppose to come back, you had all the chipotle you could ask for!

@kathleenramm The most? Probably like 10 or 12 at some point. I don’t count very well, haha.

@devastate-lasting

Yeah, I really like how adding multiple POV you can explore different avenues of the story while adding a new flavor to the narrative.

What the most POV you’ve ever had in one story?

@jodi-maile

It’s really cool how you split up POV with your sister like that! My siblings and I might do that in the future, but right now…[Read more]

@jodi-maile ooooo the each writing charries so the voices are different! soomeone else who did that!! I am doing that co-writing a book with my bestie!!! She’s taking one, and I’m taking the other, and then we have one we sort of do together. it’s so fun, and works well since all three are very different lives, cultures, and thinking.

well, people! I think for now I have enough readers, but if I do end up needing more I’ll post another topic. 🙂 thanks guys!

@kathleenramm Ooo I like the sound of your story! Five POV must be so fun to develop each voice, make them seem more real.

with a rare exception, I can’t bear to do stories in 1 POV. I like the torture of the reader too much hehehe

with pretty much every one of my stories I have 3 main POV that I go between, and with each book I might change one…[Read more]

@calidris ok, sounds good!

@kathleenramm I usually write in several POVs! I like to give insight in what happens to each person, and since usually they aren’t around each other, also shed light on other things that happen in entwining storylines.

Mirabelle looked at it nervously, unconsciously moving closer to me, her previous confidence dissipating as she looked at it, confused and nervous.
“Another reflection?”
I shifted my hand over on the kitchen’s island counter next to me, once again grabbing the closest weapon in reach–a rubber spatula.