@writerlexi1216
Active 2 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Dude these look awesome!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@nova21 Thank you! I hope to!
@writerlexi1216 Thanks! Hopefully my brain will work, haha…
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I feel that! Ooo, I love jogging too!! Well, hang in there and if you need to, just put the scene outline in brackets and move on (e.g. [#1 wants to attack and #2 wants to stay put; they argue, but #1 wins eventually]).
Wow!! I’m impressed!! Great job, keep it up!!!
Nice!! I like that…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Tysm! I’ll probably post the story here for critique sometime soon when I finish drafting.
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Aw, sorry. Is there any way I can help (read it and give tips/brainstorm/advice)? I totally feel that most of the time.
Seriously?!?! AWESOME!!!!
*drools* From where? I don’t know if this is just a thing where I live, but have you heard of Barbarosa? It has really good coffee too!!
Tell him I told him to coope…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Hi!!! 🙂 I saw you had tagged me for your story, so I came over here. Then I saw where you had posted the link to the first chapter. All this to say that I just read Ch. 1 and it was awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 Literally, there are not enough words to describe how amazing it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks, girl!!! ❤
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Ah, yes, my maths… ;-; I might try to do some if I don’t get distracted right now…
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
It’s good!! I only write about 250 words today, but I finished plotting for one of my POVs, so that’s nice. Just gotta finish the other POV, then I’m all done with that! I just made a word-count goal, which is 75k by the end of the year. Pretty loose, but we’ll see how it goes… 🤞
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Pretty good, actually! Worked on my novella, plotted a little more, tried to plan a catching up schedule…anyways, my homework has gone horribly.
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Lucy Israel posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey! I am stuck, I can’t think of what to write next in my book!
I have the whole idea of what I want it to be, but It just can’t seem to be able to get from my mind to the paper.Never Alone,
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Lucy Israel replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
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Ribbonash replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
You’re welcome! I’m so glad they were helpful! I’m fairly new at giving feedback, so it’s good to know that I’m fairly good at it and I can be helpful rather than just plain critical. It was my pleasure! I loved every second of your lengthy chapters!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Ah, I’d be honored to have you read my work! I’d be really happy if you do! And I’ll work hard, I swear ;-;
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 All but the last are from The Mafia of Heather Flights, which is currently in plotting shambles! I’d love for you to read it, haha. I’m really excited to write/draft it, so I might tag you when it’s time to beta-read…though I might be posting some short stories in the near future! Thank you so much by the way!
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Lucy Israel replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
hey!
it’s good to meet you!my current book I am writing about is called The War of the Two Worlds. It’s about a girl named Ravial, she has special powers, she can fly and draw. Her land was invaded By the Keepers who once owned a island across the dark sea. her father was killed protecting his family against one of them try…[Read more]
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 This is a really good topic!
Just some random snip-its of dialogue from my WIP (first draft, so don’t expect anything fantastic):
“You haven’t lost me. I’ll see you again, you know. This isn’t the end, only a parting for now.”
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I sit with her for a long time before she uncovers her streaky red eyes. I reach out a hand. In…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216
Which is most likely to wear a penannular? Deek or Newton? I’m just wondering for the illustration:) -
Katherine replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Of course I would understand, girl! I know that we all have a lot of school going on. I haven’t written anything in my novel for several weeks because of school. Yep, we will definitely do it another time.🙂💗 You’re welcome!!!! And thank you!!!!! 🙂
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Katherine replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 🙂 No worries. I understand. Yes, we can do it together another time!! 🙂 Good luck on your history test tomorrow!!!🍀
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Aww, I’m sorry! I definitely have those days when I feel stuck, but maybe you could try taking a break, or maybe write a different scene! That’s a trick that works for me oftentimes. Hope that helps! 🙂
Thanks! Goodnight,
Never Alone,
Lucy.