@whalekeeper
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You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.
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Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.
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Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!
I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.
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I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot and I wouldn’t bat an eye.
As for the world, your inspiration photos are close to what I pictured while I read. There was this sense of dry coldness in the described surroundings, if that makes sense.
Are drakes a type of dragon? Wingless, maybe? I don’t remember the variations. Is there a reason for draconids turning into dogs or cats?
After reading this, I started thinking about how much each writer likes to be subtle or overt with religion. I enjoy reading your stories. But when I got to the section about your theme ideas – none of those ideas were at the top of my mind. XD It makes feedback challenging, in a fun way.
I’m glad you’ve found something fun to write alongside your main project! I don’t know how much I’ll participate in helping because I’m already helping with your other project, but I’ll follow your updates anyway.
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(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)
I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD
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yours are so wacky lol
The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃
Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Life be like that sometimes.
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One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
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Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?
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I want to know where the boy’s shirt comes from, it’s quite amusing to me. 🙂
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A walking echo becomes friends with a kid who is generationally traumatized by suitcases and green haired women.
A new god learns what office life is like, falls in love with a Volkswagen bus, and spirals in the complexities of self fulfillment.
A woman afraid of Picasso-style art teams up with a boy to figure out why his face is so flat, and the two of them accidentally become cosmic keystones.
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I like y’all’s, they’re pleasantly confusing and intriguing. XD
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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?
[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
How old are you?
“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my body or my head. There’s a newspaper clipping about me at a music festival fifty years ago. I… don’t even know how long it’s been or how it works.”
Do you have a favorite comic book character?
“Captain Memphis isn’t bad. The really cool thing about Memphis is that he’s a harbinger. He collects powers from our world’s dust rings. The comics were written back in the 7990s but they’re more accurate about the rings than people thought.”
[Thinks.] “The last books I read were Harrowing Life, Cant of Lipstick, and Deepworld IV. Never thought I would read books with those titles, but they were pretty good.”
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I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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