Enid

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

XD Yep, she’s pretty fun to write.

@smiley

It’s a good one!

@whalekeeper

Agreed! <3

@whalekeeper

Thanks for being aware of that 💗💗 I know other people don’t understand what it feels like to be in the thick of it. Sometimes what looks like a step forwards from the outside doesn’t feel like one. And thank you for you’re encouragement!

@whalekeeper

I guess it’s sad and confusing 😉 <3

@whalekeeper lol

@loopylin that’s too funny! So most of your characters are like that?

@whalekeeper

Yeah, how I think of it is by their fruits you shall know them. But to know the fruits of something, you either have to judge by the spirit beforehand, or you have to put it into practice to know whether it be good or evil. The problem is that while good trees produce good fruit, and bad trees produce bad fruit, there are some things…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision

Felicity 

“Decided to test the system?”

She shrugged. “School’s not really my thing.”

Lois looked at her disapprovingly. “You’ve never even been to school before.”

Felicity grinned at him and then quickly changed the subject.

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?”

She open…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh I did just realize that I have this one character dynamic that I always fall into. It’s where one character is the super chaotic one and constantly wants to go do things and they have a friend/sibling/coworker/whatever who is always really chill and tired, maybe a bit grumpy. The chaotic character is always dragging around the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…

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@savannah_grace2009

Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…

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@whalekeeper hmmm…

I don’t remember.

@euodia-vision @whalekeeper @calyhuge

Felicity 

“Filthy children! Get out of here! Thieves!” A scratchy high pitched voice cried out.

“Is that pudding?!? I just cleaned that! Achk! Chip dust! Out, foul speck! Get out, get out!!”

An old woman with leathery skin and hair as white as Felicity’s advanced on them from across the room. She brandish…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @acancello

A snippet for anyone interested, it’s unedited lol

 

The smell of womens perfume and expensive aftershave fills the usually grimy hallway. Incandescent lights from above the large hall illuminates the strange mix of people. Miners wearing their usual overalls and…

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@Whalekeeper

Well It’s not a milk allergy exactly… as in I haven’t been diagnosed with that allergy… but it does make me feel bad so I ‘try’ to stay away from it XD Because of my nut allergies, I’m left drinking oat milk. Which isn’t terrible, but it’s confusing when you want cheerios… because you have to realize you are eating toasty…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I love the name Lilitu as well! Another one of my favorites in my story is Sef, and I absolutely love Ottoline’s name!!! And Marcurious. I guess I might be a little biased, haha!

But thank you! I’ll pass on the message to Lilitu…haha! Right now he and Sef are running through the woods to evade the Pythonos. He’s a little busy, but…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent. So it’s totally fine if lots of people recognize them! I guess it doesn’t matter, however I want to make the Bible/Bible stories interesting and exciting for those who…[Read more]