Enid

@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares

Hey,I need help knowing if this scene feels forced or anything.

The context is that Mandin invited Nahim to a festival that Mandin’s family was having, and Nahim promised to finally tell Mandin his traumatic backstory.

Evening came,…

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Yes, I’ve been thinking about that for the past couple months. For whatever reason, skinwalkers ad hydras have been popping into my head every time I think about it…

I’ll begin brainstorming but for now let us set up our characters. Idk, maybe we make up someone who can get captured by a dragon and everyone goes to save them 🤷🏻‍♀️…[Read more]

@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol

Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅

The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.

It’s…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper

Well, we have some bad teachers and haven’t yet met the good ones. Sounds like an average school to me.

It’d take an exceptional teacher to change Chase’s mind about school. I mean, if your school teacher was either a man you were always afraid of or a woman who literally tried to kill you, how would you…[Read more]

@rae @whalekeeper Agreed. Or we could practice writing morally good adult characters which is a lot harder than I thought it would be.

Dante

“Fine with me.”

@whalekeeper

Thank you, that means so much 🥹🥹🥹💖💖

@loopylin @whalekeeper

Trying again

Chase

“Hey, calm down, kid. Just trying to help you up.”

Chase tried to say he was sorry but all that would come out were weak vocalizations that made no sense. He acted like a scared rabbit, his breathing fast and shallow, his eyes darting, and his body shaking.

Friend or foe? Who is this? 

Heavy…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper

Chase

Chase hadn’t realized until now that his breathing was unnatural. He stared straight into the one eye of the person who had caught him and opened his mouth to speak. Nothing came out. He tried again. He couldn’t make any words form, only weak vocalizations. Giving up, he allowed his eyes to flash neon yellow like…[Read more]

@rae Oof the poor teacher 😅 @whalekeeper

Dante

Dante thought about Seb’s words, then quickly decided he didn’t like thinking about them. Oddly, he kinda understood. He stared at the same nothing as his friend.

A loud pounding on the door behind him snapped him out of it. He hopped to his feet and stood in front of Seb, arms crossed.

“You thi…[Read more]

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The Twinss

“That was close.” Eddie’s whisper tickled Ellie’s ear. Ellie leaned away and scowled.

“You’re close.”

The two girls were hiding in yet another closet. This one was smaller this time, more like a locker or cubby for storing school supplies.

Ed’s tail brushed the disgruntled Ellie in the face as she tried shuffling aro…[Read more]

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Great sorrow hath come upon the people of Kingdom Pen. I have memes too.

@rae He sounds awesome lol. I can’t wait for my charrie to meet him.

Teleporter incidents? Yeah, Jaylen’s actually no stranger to that. Maybe she’ll tell him about the bread incident of ’79 sometime.

Also, I liked seeing Ilsa’s thoughts. She’s so cute.

@whalekeeper lol Winston is not having it.

Hunter

Something small was moving in the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I know…..

I’ve got some hilarious stuff to show everyone.

@youpeoples

Mr. Gregory 

“I swear, this school will be the death of me.” Gregory pinched the bridge of his nose in frustration. “Not war, not old age, but children.”

He looked up at the four armed janitor. Liko seemed nervous in Gregory’s presence despite being almost a foot taller than him. He kept fidgeting and shuffling his feet.

“Do…[Read more]

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Dante

“Only pyro in existence? Of course you’re not. If you were, it’d just be called Seb syndrome.”

“You know what I mean.”

“Yeah. I know what you mean.” Dante finished off his scone, then leaned back and stared at the ceiling.

“Ever wish you weren’t?”

I am probably looking more for scene ideas @whalekeeper tbh, lol. I’m kinda in the middle, where Leon/Riker are def plunging into the darkest before they finally come to the light, a darkness that will probably last for several chapters (although there WILL be good scenes happening too! <3).

Either way, Riker’s guilt/shame is about to worsen…[Read more]

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Ty for the advice and resources!

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Dante

“Alright. You’re the bait.” His reflective eye flashed for a moment in the dark, then he was gone.

The mob rushed past. As Dante hoped, they were more concerned with catching Sebastian, who was the original offender.

Seb raced ahead, then ran suddenly into an empty classroom. The people at the front of the crowd fol…[Read more]

@rae yeah! Definitely will make for some funny interactions.

@loopylin @whalekeeper

We can just add anything to this world, right? I’m going to add Hunter into a palace not unlike his ancestor Snake’s, and Jaylen I’ll add into a house she’ll recognize.

Hunter

He awoke in a building, sprawling above him. He recognized it from the old…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Apparently Dante is immune to my current writing block

Dante 

Running was one of Dante’s best skills. He kept pace easily with Sebastian as excited children crashed through the kitchen after them. His jacket flew behind him. Pastries tumbled out of the pockets. He turned to look behind, running almost sideways now, and la…[Read more]