Enid

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Emeline

“So! Now that we’ve eaten and rested. I think it’s high time we find the mysterious inhabitants of this castle. Why don’t we go exploring?” Barnes suggested after consoling Hugo.

“Finally!” Rowen exclaimed, getting to his feet.

“Thank you for the meal, Ms. Barnes. Let’s get moving, Tenz just needs a few minutes. I ap…[Read more]

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yeah, true.

and haha, unlike some of the other authors, my characters abandoning their half-baked resemblances of morals isn’t gonna be surprising to me, especially if they go against each other at any point.

I let my charries on a loose leash ok??? lol

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Making our own website would be cool.

I have no memory of joining kp and making my account. Did we have to send in an application email or something? What was it like?

@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium

I know, it is really sad 🥺

Yes, Whaley, I do remember that! It lasted for like a week or something 💀

You know what’d be really cool is if we created an offshoot of Kingdom Pen since it’s not super active in articles and stuff. Like all of us in the forum who are interested start a website similar to KP and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Could you tag me when you post the next sections? I don’t have a character in this but I still enjoyed reading it. 😊

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Yeah, that makes so much sense!

Oh yeah, I get that. I have a lot of writing knowledge, I just don’t always apply it 💀😂

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 I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for.

tbh I’m not sure what my guys would wish for either. They’re confusing.

plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.

@whalekeeper

No girl, I love it! I think the key to writing chaotic scenes is pacing. Like if you have a lot of long sentences people are going to get confused, but in your case, you stuck to shorter/mid-length sentences and sprinkled in only a few long ones. It worked really well 👌

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Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩

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“My microwave lasagna…”

Everyone stopped to stare at a slouched man in sunglasses, Joe. He shrugged. “I’m still hungry.”

Hehe I love it

Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.

And Joe would probably just ask for a cup of coffee or for a mute button for his overly talk…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Cool, I’ll check it out.

@whalekeeper kind of a cool writer’s choice, everyone sees the lines as from different characters.

@whalekeeper ohh ok, in other words it could be your character speaking if you want.

although hats are a THING in Mundy’s home world. You do NOT mess with someone’s hat. So it stand to reason he’d be ticked off at them for taking it.

@whalekeeper lol missed that

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“My gun -”

“My original clothes are gone, hat and all. I feel violated.”

Crosshair and Mundy?

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Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Pain. Brutus moaned as he lay on the ground, regretting greatly his decision to use that attack. Tears pricked at his eyes. The last time he had been hurt this bad was when he fought Max, but then, then his father was beside…[Read more]

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You said ‘need’ a lot, does that mean you would only talk about death if you need to, not at any other time?

Yes.

And what time in a story would you believe it is a necessary time?

When a character does die. Characters die, there is no doubt about. Sometimes you need a character to die to improve another character’s ark. I’m just say…[Read more]