whaley the great and terrible

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz and Reid

Reid’s green glow faded, and his tendrils disappeared. Tenz left the snake, catching his brother as he stubbled.

“You should have protected yourself from the snake’s scales,” Tenz quietly chided, his own glow still remaining.

“I had to focus on the others. How long will I be out after you heal me?”

“I’m…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that’s fine.

@rae

Percival

“Tenz! Kill the snake, don’t hold back! Snap his neck!” Reid yelled. With one swift movement, Tenz had his arms wrapped around the serpents neck, and twisted it. The head fell to the ground with a thump that echoed across the halls.

“What happened?” Barnes asked, holding her head and appearing t…[Read more]

@Whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

I think my parents have just given up trying to make me go to bed. I was up past 2 am reading the other day.😅 How many little siblings do you have? I have 5.

@smiley

Greetings! I don’t think we’ve ever met, but I’ve seen some of your old posts. I have never watched a marvel movie ever, but I started Lunar once and…[Read more]

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity

Some people…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah. We used to write together but never really got too far into anything. She still loves to read but I don’t think she’s written in a while. My brother hasn’t really shown any interest in writing, either, so I guess it’s just me.

@whalekeeper

Lol. I remember Lydibug, though… she was around on the RPs for a while. My sister de…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

awww I love that, it’s like enemies to friends XD as all good friendships should be

okay maybe not but sometimes that’s how it works

it’s really good, it’s a football movie which is usually not my thing but the characters are soooo good

yeah same, I thought of st least a hundred ways it could go wrong but overall they ma…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

huh. okay then.

@whalekeeper

yup 100% agree

and I’m happy to say that I now have a friend group that I love so much💕

God blessed me with that

well I have recently discovered that Remember the Titans is like the best movie ever!!

I actually went skiing for Christmas which was terrifying cause I’ve never been before but after some fails I got the hang of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m a 9:00PM in bed, 5:00Am up and at em sort of person.

Mornings are the best!!!

What made you think I’m a morning person?

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @theshadow @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kyronthearcanin @anyone-else

Ah, yes. Let’s see, where were we?

It looks like Ben, Flare, Baron, Jenna, and Ellis are in one group in the middle of the city, with Felicity having just run off. @raxforge @rae @loopylin

Rina, Klethen, Ilahna, Jirah, Rosemary, and Rapha are on the ship with Fleet, heading out of the city. (I believe Rosemary and Rapha fell off and are…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I think she’s really fun, but I’ll talk about it in the long feedback post. 😊

@whalekeeper yess Tyn is awesome

IDK why, I just like her.

Oliver is my other favorite but that’s probably cause he’s an Australian lizard and you know how I feel about both of those things.

@whalekeeper

I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting cha…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow

I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍

Awesome!

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is the discussion guide. It’s rought right now. It was inspired by the discussion guides at the end of the second edition books for The Wingfeather Saga. However, I think that’s resulted in it being written for a younger audience than my book is aimed at (I’m…[Read more]

@theducktator thanks!

@whalekeeper haha yep

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

End credits song! (This was the most fitting version of this song I could find. As an aside, if you haven’t, look up the history of this song.)

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Happy Boxing Day! (do you celebrate this in the USA?) Let’s box this draft up with the final chapter!

Chapter the 34th – The Choice

There is one more thing I need to write for this that I will do later. A discussion guide for the reader. After that I will have…[Read more]